Can somebody please help me with sentences?
Regards,
Fizzi

1-An extension of the scholarship will not only enable me to complete my master thesis, but also, to produce a high quality master work.
2- In addition, it will provide me with the opportunity to attend and present my research work in international conferences.
3. Similar application by another master candidate, (name of a candidate) from the University of S has been approved by the department of Y.
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1-An extension of the scholarship will enable me not only to complete my master's thesis, but also to produce a high quality master work. ['Master work' may be very wrong-- I don't know what you mean by this]
2- In addition, it will provide me with the opportunity to attend international conferences and present my research.

3. Similar application by another master candidate, (name of a candidate) from the University of S has been approved by the department of Y. -- This is an inappropriate idea to include in your applicaton; what other candidates have experienced is not relevant to your own merit.
Hi Mister Micawber,

I think it should be...but also to produce a high quality work.

Thanks again,

Fizzi
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I think it should be uncountable.
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Speaking of which, do we say bachelor'S degree too or just drop the 's'.Emotion: smile
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bachelor's degree
master's degree
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Thanks Mister Micawber!
Fizzi
To,

The Manager,

Luxury Travel

Kuwait.

From,

Ms.Linet Dsouza,

Luxury Travel

Kuwait.

Dear Sir,

Sub:Request for annual vacation

As I completed 1 year 4 months in this company ,I am planning to travel india for 1 month as My father’s health is not good.so, I kindly request you to grant me 1 month leave from 15 july to 15 August.

Thanks & Regards,

Linet Dsouza.
To: Manager, Luxury Travel, Kuwait

Subj: Request for annual vacation

Dear Mr [surname],

I have completed 1 year 4 months with this company, and I am planning to travel to India for one month, as my father's health is not good. I request you to kindly grant me one month's leave from 15 July to 15 August 2009.

Thank you very much for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Linet Dsouza.
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