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hello I draft the letter for my daughter and I do not know this is complete and correct English. please help

p.s: she wants to study in this school as an international student. where I should note this?

senders name

senders address

number

email


Date:

principle name


Subject: application for 11th grade


Dear XX

I am a parent who is seeking an open and lively learning environment for my daughter in order for her to experience balanced development in academic, moral, physical and artistic qualities, as well as have the value of love, goodness and truth nurtured in her researching secondary schools, I am greatly impressed by your school's educational philosophy, dedicated teaching staff, overall facilities and excellent track record. Therefore, I would like to apply on behalf of my daughter,XX, for admission into your school.

XX has graduated from 10th grade .Through her studies, she gained a strong academic background while developing her moral values and sportive qualities as well Moreover, she earned high marks in different subjects including Mathematics, Geometry, Physics, English and Chemistry.

In addition to academic achievement, we have provided opportunities for XX to better develop her other abilities and talents. She has participated in various extra-curricular activities including Swimming, rowing and drawing classes. She is a member of Oil Company and province swimming team and has won many awards in swimming. Also she is well trained in Computer. She has participated in Mock IELTS Exam an year ago and got 6.5 but she has gained more knowledge since then and she will surly achieve a better mark next time.


Additionally XX is dedicated to serving others. She has been a member of Students Council in school and she has always participated in school`s charity works and sold things to raise money. These activities have helped her develop confidence, responsibility and interpersonal skills.

We sincerely hope that XX can be admitted to your school as an international student, where she will receive appropriate guidance and continue to develop and express her unique individuality.

Enclosed are the application form and the required documents. I look forward to your favourable reply.

Sincerely

XX

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Hello, I have drafted a the letter to apply for my daughter to enroll in a school, but and I do not know if this is complete and correct. English. Please help.

P.S.: she wants to study in this school as an international student. where should I note this?

senders name

senders address

number

email

Date:

principal’s name

Subject: application for 11th grade

Dear XX,

I am writing to apply for my daughter to enroll in your school as an international student. I am a parent who is seeking an open and lively learning environment for my daughter in order for her to experience have the best chance of a balanced development in academically, morally, physically and artistically, qualities, as well as have to learn the values of love, goodness and truth. nurtured in her researching secondary schools, I am greatly impressed by your school's educational philosophy, dedicated teaching staff, overall various facilities and excellent track record. Therefore, I would like to apply on behalf of my daughter,XX, for admission into your school for the term starting in September 2019.

XX has graduated from 10th grade with excellent grades Through her studies, she gained a strong academic background while developing her moral values and sportive qualities as well Moreover, In particular, she earned high marks in different subjects including Mathematics, Geometry, Physics, English and Chemistry.

In addition to academic achievement, We have provided opportunities for always encouraged XX to better develop her other abilities and talents. She has participated in various extra-curricular activities including swimming, rowing and drawing classes. She is a member of Oil Company and the provincial swimming team and has won many awards in swimming. Also, she is well trained in computer literate. She has participated in sat a mock IELTS Exam an a year ago and got 6.5 overall, but she has gained more knowledge since then and she will surely achieve a better mark next time.

Additionally, XX is dedicated to serving others. She has been a member of the Students Council in school, and she has always participated in her school’s charity works activities and sold things to raise money. These activities have helped her develop confidence, responsibility and interpersonal skills.

We sincerely hope that XX can be admitted to your school as an international student, where she will receive appropriate guidance and continue to develop and express her unique individuality.

Enclosed are the application form and the required documents. I look forward to your favourable reply.

Yours faithfully,

Sincerely

XX