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Dear Sir/Madam,Hereby I like to introduce myself to you. I am a second year student of the Higher Professional Education at (Bachelor level), Department Build Environment. After summer Holliday I have to do an internship within a period from September 2008 till February 2009. About the internship I have a question. I would like to do an internship abroad, especially in , . After a long search I have found your company on the internet. My question is if it is possible to do this internship at your company. I would like to do this together with another student of my class. I am approaching your company because I am very interested in your projects at the moment and what I have seen in the portfolio at your site. Because we have chosen specialization building management we would like to work in the building management, in the work preparation and/or project managing.

Would you be able to help us further with our internship? Yours faithfully,

Nick Strating The other student: Clint van Zanten
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Dear Sir/Madam,

Hereby I like to introduce myself to you. I am a second year student of the Higher Professional Education at Amsterdam (Bachelor level), Department Build Environment [This phrase does not make sense to me]. After summer Holliday I have to do an internship within a period from September 2008 till February 2009. About the internship I have a question. I would like to do an internship abroad, especially in Australia, Perth. After a long search I have found your company on the internet. My question is if it is possible to do this internship at your company. I would like to do this together with another student of my class. I am approaching your company because I am very interested in your projects at the moment and what I have seen in the portfolio at your site. Because we have chosen specialization building management we would like to work in the building management, in the work preparation and/or project managing.

Enclosed/attached please find my resume and a copy of my college transcript. Would you be able to help us further with our internship?

Yours faithfully,
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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a second year student at the Higher Professional Education of (Bachelor level), institute Built Environment. After summer holidays I will have an internship in the period from September 2008 up to February 2009.

I would like to do an internship abroad, especially in , . After seeking on the internet I found your company. And I want to know if it is possible to do this internship at your company. I would like to do this together with another student of my class. I am approaching your company because I am very interested in your projects at the moment and what I have seen in the portfolio at your site. Because we have chosen the specialization building management, we would like to work in work preparation and/or as assistant executor.

Enclosed/attached please find my resume and a copy of my college transcript.

Would you be able to help us further with our internship?

Yours faithfully,

Nick Strating
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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a second year student at the Higher Professional Education of Amsterdam (Bachelor level), institute Built Environment [I still don't know what this means, but I am sure it is not right]. After summer holidays, I am expected to intern in the period from September 2008 to February 2009.

I would like to do an internship abroad, especially in Perth, Australia.[Give a reason why Perth] After seeking on the internet I found your company. I would like to know if it is possible to do this internship at your company, together with another student in my class. I am approaching your company because I am very interested in your projects at the moment [Name the projects] and what I have seen in the portfolio at your site [Indicate what you saw of interest]. Because we have chosen a specialization in building management, we would like to work in work preparation and/or as assistant executor [I am unfamiliar with both of these terms and suspect that they are inaccurately translated].

Enclosed/attached [Choose one] please find my resume and a copy of my college transcript.

Would you be able to help us further with our internship?

Yours faithfully,

Nick Strating
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Letter1
I am very pleased to write recommendation letter for Mr Kyaw Thu Htun who joined Elite Tech Development Co.,Ltd in September, 2012. He graduated with Bachelor Degree in Port and Harbor Engineering from Myanmar Maritime University and served as an Assistant Engineer in Port Department of our company.
As an assistant engineer, he assisted Chief Engineer of Port Department in office works and engineering field works. At present, he served as site engineer at “Thilawa Oil Depot Project and LPG Tanks Construction Project”. He assisted in conduct of engineering design and construction managements. His duties involved to contact with contractors as well as quality control of the project. He proved himself as a good communicator with strong leadership qualities and performed with utmost competence in his assigned projects.
After working three years in our company, he became one of our valuable engineers. He is very active, hard working and studious in his engineering fields. His work performances were strong and I believe that he will have great success in his future. I believed that he will become a valuable addition to your organization and company. I am very much pleased to express him as an engineer of energetic, responsible and experienced one. If you have any question or require further information about Mr Kyaw Thu Htun, please feel free to contact me.

Letter2
I am glad to write this recommendation for Mr Kyaw Thu Htun who is working for Elite Tech Development Co.,Ltd from September 2009 until now. As a Chief Engineer of Port Department, I guided him in several works and he has proved his capability as a talent engineer.
As an assistant engineer he was one of the responsible persons for the implementation of the project which include site managements, construction methods and quality control of the project. He assisted in engineering design and construction managements and he has proved as a good coordinator with strong leadership skills in management and engineering fields. He established good relationship with his colleagues in the company. He was highly motivated to learn more and always tried to successfully accomplish his tasks successful.
During his time in our company, he was effective and integral part of our engineering team. He is one of enthusiasm, self-starter, responsible and experienced engineer in Civil, Port and Harbor Engineer Fields. I have known him for more than three years and I never felt disappointment on him. I believe that he will have great success in his near future and he will be a valuable addition to your company and institution. I therefore highly recommend him for a position in your company without reservation. If you need further information about him, please do not hesitate to contact me.

I am looking forward your reply.
With Regards.

This is to inform you that we have call tenders for Supply Delivery, Installation, testing and Commissioning of VRV/VRF Air Conditionining system for the New Building of SLBC at Head Office.

M/s K.S. Trading (Pvt) Ltd has quote for the above tender and also they have mentioned in their tender document that have completed the

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As a skilled human resources professional with experience in a wide range of HR functions, I am pleased to present the enclosed resume. You will find my dedication and enthusiastic attitude to be of value to your company as your next HR Generalist.

My expertise lies in successfully coordinating organizational planning and development through strategic HR initiatives and programs. Throughout my career, I have facilitated compensation handling & planning, recruitment, benefits administration, staff training programs, and employee relations practices. With complementary skills in process improvement, records management, and team collaboration, I am confident that I can make an immediate and positive contribution to your company.

I'm sorry for the way I acted Sunday night, I know that it was uncalled for and wrong. I was being selfish just because I just wanted to sit upstairs eat an watch T.V and I know it was a lot of stress on you because you've been cooking and running around all day and I should've helped you and I should've put more effort in to help in whatever way that I could have that night and I truly apologize for it.
I wasn't saying that I wanted you to stop calling me and asking me for thing I just used to get mad and aggravated when you called me so much and when me, granny, and daddy talked they both said to me everybody gets aggravated and in my situation it just didn't come out right at the time and I didn't know how to say it face to face. I know I have to step up and help out around the house and not just because I'm getting older but because you can't be the only one doing things around here and cleaning up after everybody.
I need to take advantage of my free time I am going to be focusing on my career and my drivers ED class staying on top of my work to get scholarships and grants so you won't have to pay so much money for school, I know I'm really late on doing this but I really need to change my life around for the better so you will be seeing some changes in me.

this is my first attempt at writing a motivation letter so please help me & check my letter. i would be very grateful if u could show the things that need correction. its a bit urgent.so help!!


Dear Sir or Madam:


With this letter, I would like to express my interest in applying for a Master of Science in Finance starting in autumn 2019. I strongly believe that my educational background, working experience, personal skills and my motivation make me a very good candidate for this program.


I had completed Bachelor of Business Administration and Master of Business Administration major in Finance and Banking from International Islamic University, Chittagong. During my degree, I was very active in many facets of university life. I completed internship in a Bank. This gave me an outlet to apply theoretical knowledge in a practical setting and also sparked my interest in Finance and Banking.

I also completed Bachelor of Laws from National University Gazipur, Bangladesh.In evening hours I do a part time job as an apprentice lawyer with a Senior Advocate of Chittagong Judge Court.

With my current experience as a Senior Executive. I have spent the past 7 years working for a private company in Commercial department. . As part of my role I responsible for managing some commercial activities (e.g. issuance of PI, L/C open, amendment/correction, shipment, negotiation with buyers and sellers, payment realization, customs release etc.). Additionally, my role is also prepare invoices and statement of account .

I can contribute with eagerness to learn, active participation and intensive focus. I have an unlimited passion for learning. The desire to learn skills that are useful to others drives me and motivates me. I always participate actively in class, and will surely share my opinions. I can also focus intensively on one task for a long time period. My attention span is extremely long. That is an asset both to me and those I work with.

My I wish to expand my knowledge of Business Administration and I have decided to apply for this program because in my MBA program in my home country I have completed 36 credit hours only but You are provided 120 credit hours and provide me with a broad solid basis in Corporate Finance and Investment Theory. Furthermore, prestigious representatives of the business community give seminars and classes, and several courses are held in the Finance Laboratory, which provides a unique opportunity for me to perform financial research using state-of-the-art technology. I am sure it would strongly enrich my future and help me in my prospective career. Moreover I consider this program as a great opportunity to get in touch with British culture and educational system. Last but not least, I am very curious about different approaches to the geography at the foreign university.

To better introduce my background and skills I have enclosed the CV and professional achievements together with this motivation letter. Thank you for considering my application.

I look forward to your favorable reply. Studying in your department will give me the opportunities and prerequisites needed to achieve my goals. Thank you for granting me the time to review my application.


Yours faithfully,

Farzana Parvin

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