To Whom It May Concern:
I am writing to express my sincere interest in applying for a Master's Degree in Public Health at your university. My name is _____ and I am currently in my final year at the University of _____ in a four-year Health Sciences Honors Specialization program. My studies in the health sciences program involve learning about interdisciplinary perspective of health and well-being drawn from a variety of academic areas, including epidemiology, health promotion, health management and policy which are important subfields of public health. Among these areas of study, my uttermost interest in health promotion has attracted me into pursuing in the field of public health. Nearing the end of my undergraduate career, I came to a realization that in order to make changes in human health, we must focus on prevention of health-related problems instead of simply treating them. For this reason, I definitely foresee my future career being as a leader in public health field meeting many exciting challenges in protecting the public's health today and in the future.
With Masters of Public Health (MPH) degree, I hope to become a public health planner who takes an active role in building healthy and supportive communities by developing multidisciplinary and collaborative strategies for solving health-related problems. I see myself collaborating with an international global community of health professionals who have the same vision and passion in preventing illness and maintaining health within the population. The MPH program will allow me to develop leadership and research skills I need in order to advocate for change. I strongly believe that I have what it takes to become a public health planner. I have related work experiences that entail active collaboration with different public health divisions and health professionals and implementing health promotion programs in city of London. I have previous experiences collaborating with partners such as hospital administrators, Region of Peel Public Health Officials and health informatics managers in providing innovative projects involving Health informatics. Moreover, my research experience at Canadian Centre for Activity and Aging (CCAC) involved delivering health promotion programs that advocate for healthy and eating and physical activity in order to prevent chronic illnesses like obesity, diabetes, and cancer within the city of London. Also, I contributed a lot of time doing research, creating presentations, writing reports and coordinating events for the facility.
Obtaining MPH program at University of Waterloo will provide me with the best possible work and study conditions that will allow me to achieve the credentials I need to be competitive in the public health workforce. One of the strongest features of UW that separates from other universities is the practicum component in the MPH program which will provide opportunities for me to gain relevant practical experience in health care settings. This will allow me to utilize my academic abilities along with my passion for the field and consequently help me to become an advocate for change. .
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If you're in a rush, here's some quick comments:
>>My name is _ and I am currently in my final year at the University of _ in a four-year Health Sciences Honors Specialization program.
No need to state your name. It's at the bottom of your letter.
>>My studies in the health sciences program involve learning about interdisciplinary perspective of health and well-being drawn from a variety of academic areas, including epidemiology, health promotion, health management and policy which are important subfields of public health.
Rather obvious, no? Perhaps tell me what you found most interesting and challenging AND WHY. Then you will have told me something useful.
>>Also, I contributed a lot of time doing research, creating presentations, writing reports and coordinating events for the facility.
And that means what exactly? Did you learn anything? Did you enjoy it? Did you become a better person? Were you surprised by anything? In other words, tell me about YOU.
Simply telling me that you were busy doesn't tell me much.
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