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Hi! I would like to hear your opinion about my letter intent for shifting courses. And is my grammar correct?

So I take engineering course and stop [2013-2014],i want to enroll again but in other course which is B.S. in Hospitality Management and now i need to write letter of intent for shifting courses,how am i gonna improved this letter?

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Dr. Maria XxX X. XxX
Dean, College of XxX
EAXxX

Dear Dr. Maria XxX X. XxX,

Greetings! I am writing this letter to ask for your permission to allow me to shift courses. I feel that it would be in my best interests to discontinue my studies on the B.S. in Electronics and Communications Engineering as I am struggling with certain aspects of the course. I would like to shift my course to B.S. in Hospitality Management Major in Cruise line Operations as I feel that it would be in my best interests since this field is what I really wanted to undertake ever since. I would be grateful on your feedback regarding this matter.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

XxX X. XxX Jr.

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Hi! I would like to hear your opinion about my letter intent for shifting courses. And is my grammar correct?

So I take engineering course and stop [2013-2014],i want to enroll again but in other course which is B.S. in Hospitality Management and now i need to write letter of intent for shifting courses,how am i gonna improved this letter?

Here's a tip that you can use for the rest of your life. If you want help from someone with a specialized skill, then please don't abuse their specialty. In your example, you use "i" and "gonna" and so forth. If I were rude, I would reply with similar type language that would make my response useless to you.

If you're serious about wanting help, then use your reasonable best efforts to demonstrate sincerity.

Thanks!

Dr. Maria XxX X. XxX
Dean, College of XxX
EAXxX

Dear Dr. Maria XxX X. XxX,

Greetings! I am writing this letter to request a shift in my major/field of study/or whatever ask for your permission to allow me to shift courses. I want to switch from feel that it would be in my best interests to discontinue my studies on the B.S. in Electronics and Communications Engineering as I am struggling with certain aspects of the course. I would like to shift my course to B.S. in Hospitality Management Major in Cruise line (should Line be capitalized?) Operations as I feel that it would be in my best interests since this field is what I really wanted to undertake ever since. I am struggling with the complexity and volume of work associated with my engineering degree. With my background and personal interests (or however you want to introduce this sentence), I am well suited to pursuing a degree in Hospitality Management.

I would be grateful on your feedback regarding this matter.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration, and I look forward to your acceptance.

Sincerely,

XxX X. XxX Jr.

If these type of requests are usually rubberstamped, then you're good. If not, then you have more work. If I were Maria, I'd like more detail about why you're not doing well and why you think you can succeed at doing something different. But keep it short.

I am rarely here, so I won't be able to follow up with you. If you revise your letter, you might get assistance from others. Good luck!

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Hello can you guys help me also to improve my letter. Thank you in advanced.


Hello maam/sir. I am jim Vasquez, i was previously studying at ICCT in 2012 at the Diploma Computer Programming Course. Now I want to pursue my study here at ICCT. So I ask for permission to allow me to change my course from DCP to Business Administrations. Thank you