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Dear all!!

I posted this letter that I wrote to my landlord, please send me suggestions about my grammar and spelling mistakes. Thanks, GiYu

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Dear Stephen,

In order to make the installation of the Gas meter we will need a written permission from Mr xxx to carried with this procedure out, as we had been told in the the last email from the company on the 25th of April 2007. These authorization letter must include:

1. Authorization for the Tenants
2. Authorization for the installation of central heating including shower, radiators, installation fees, and gas meter.
3. Full address of the supply property
4. Type of property, i.e. detached
5. Preferred location of meter

You can leave this authorization letter in our mailbox or if you prefer we can pop into your office tomorrow at any time. Once we'll get this letter we will proceed with the payment of these month rent and we will arrange the Gas compnay visits to the premises. As we have said in all the previous emails that we've sent during the last 2 months, we are not willing to wait any longer its going to be our 3rd month and we are still living in this desperate situation.

We look forward to hearing from you,

Kindest regards,

Me
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Giyu Dear all!!

I posted this letter that I wrote to my landlord, please send me suggestions about my grammar and spelling mistakes. Thanks, GiYu

________________________________

Dear Stephen,

In order to make the installation of instal the Gas meter we will need a written permission from Mr xxx to carried with this procedure out, as we had been were told in the the last email from the company dated the 25th of April 2007. These This authorization letter must include:

1. Authorization for the Tenants
2. Authorization for the installation of central heating including shower, radiators, installation fees, and gas meter.
3. Full address of the supply property concerned
4. Type of property, i.e. detached
5. Preferred location of meter

You can leave this authorization letter in our mailbox or, if you prefer, we can pop into your office tomorrow at any time. Once we'll get this letter, we will proceed with the payment of these month this month's rent and we will arrange for the Gas compnay's visits to the premises. As we have said in all the previous emails that we've sent during the last 2 months, we are not willing to wait any longer. its going to This will be our 3rd month in the property and we are still living in this desperate situation.

We look forward to hearing from you,

Kindest regards,

Me

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Giyu Dear all!!

I posted this letter that I wrote to my landlord, please send me suggestions about my grammar and spelling mistakes. Thanks, GiYu

________________________________

Dear Stephen,

In order to make the installation of the Gas meter we will need a written permission from Mr xxx to carried with this procedure out, as we had been told in the the last email from the company on the 25th of April 2007. These authorization letter must include:

1. Authorization for the Tenants
2. Authorization for the installation of central heating including shower, radiators, installation fees, and gas meter.
3. Full address of the supply property
4. Type of property, i.e. detached
5. Preferred location of meter

You can leave this authorization letter in our mailbox or if you prefer we can pop into your office tomorrow at any time. Once we'll get this letter we will proceed with the rent payment of these month and we will arrange the Gas compnay visits to the premises. As we have said in all the previous emails that we've sent during the last 2 months, we are not willing to wait any longer its going to be our 3rd month and we are still living in this desperate situation.

We look forward to hearing from you,

Kindest regards,

Me

Hi GiYu,

This is my version of your letter. You may use it for reference.

Dear Stephen,
I am writing to you in regard to the gas meter installation. We had been informed by the gas company e-mail dated 25th of April 2007 that in order to install the gas meter, the procedure requires a written authorization from Mr. *** which shall include the following:

1. Authorization from the Tenants (do you mean consent ?)
2. Authorization for the installation of central heating including shower, radiators, installation fees, and gas meter. (line 2 confuses me. Authorization from whom?)
3. Full address of the property
4. Type of property, i.e. detached
5. Preferred location of meter

You may either leave this authorization letter in our mailbox, or we can drop by your office sometime tomorrow to pick it up. Once we get this letter we will proceed with the rent payment and we arrangement with the gas company to survey the property. As we said in previous emails during the last 2 months, we were not willing to accept any further delay any longer as it’s going to be our 3rd month living in this desperate condition..

We look forward to hearing from you,
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