Hi,

Recently I came to know about this forum. And all of you did a great job here. I need to submit a motivation letter for a scholarship by tomorrow. So I made a draft one. Could you please check my letter and provide your valuable comments or suggestions. I will be very grateful for your help.

Thanks in advance

Letter of Motivation

I am writing to apply for the XXXX Masters Program Scholarships.

I get admission to the M.Sc. program in Information Technology in the Universitaet ABCD this year. I have completed my under graduation from the dept. of Computer Science & Engineering from AAAA University of Science & Technology, one of the prestigious public university in BBBB. I have outstanding academic background. I got the position 7th in my batch. My degree covers all aspects and applications of the electrical and computational methods. I have learned the programming skills and the applications in engineering through a variety of computer courses, like data structures, algorithms, operating systems, etc. I took several electrical courses. Among them I mostly enjoyed the Computer Interfacing & Instrumentation course. I designed a programmable display board with 8086 microprocessor kit as a project work. Through my studies I became fascinated with the issues of data communication and computer networking techniques. My strong interests in advanced communication technology has compelled me to be skilled in this field. Through my studies I have learned how to impart new technologies in the societies and evaluates its consequences.

After completing my graduation, I joined in a telecommunication company, Orascom Telecom, a GSM operator, as an Optimization Engineer in the Radio Access Network. The objective was to optimize the radio network in terms of capacity and quality. I was involved in optimizing the User Mobile interface in a GSM cellular network. Capacity planning and maintaining a standard grade of service by minimizing the interference level was my main concern. There I got chances to work with the XXXX Telecommunication product. I acquired clear concepts of the XXXX Radio Base stations and Base stations Controllers. I am skilled in optimization of the radio parameters. As an expert end-user of XXXX radio products, I experienced few distinctive features in terms of coverage, capacity and the radio parameters, which are very much customizable compare to other radio equipments. In order to evaluate my project management skills I would like to mention one of the successfully finished technical projects during my tenure. I coordinated the IBM Metrica Performance Manager installation and up gradation project. This is a real time performance management application, helps to optimize the network infrastructure and improve the network availability. As a technical coordinator, I setup the interfaces with the base stations controllers, designed the database queries and documented the technical issues.

I have attended a language course in order to improve my knowledge of German and to better understand the German culture. I am also fluent in English and Bengali. My previous working experience in an international multilingual company helped me to easily adapt to a new environment and I have also learned the commitment necessary to succeed as an individual and as a member of a team.

From the very childhood I cherish an idea to be involved in research work. At the AAAA University of Science and Technology my desire became stronger. And as a consequence I got a chance to get myself admitted at the Stuttgart university in the INFOTECH department, one of the prestigious university in the world for research work. This is a great opportunity for me indeed. I do need to work hard to pursue my M.Sc. that I cherished in the core of my heart. XXXX has a good reputation everywhere in the world for its goods because of its design durability and standard. Getting a scholarship from the noted XXXX will provide a great opportunity to gain knowledge and research skills. I should be proud of to be a member of XXXX family.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to ask that you consider my application for a scholarship under the *** Masters Program Scholarships.

I will be admitted to the M.Sc. program in Information Technology in the Universitaet ABCD this year after graduating 7th in my year from the department. of Computer Science & Engineering from AAAA University of Science & Technology, a well regarded university in BBBB.

My degree provided a good understanding of the application of electrical and computational methods. Additionally I have undertaken extra courses to ensure that I have a strong grasp of programming and engineering applications including data structures, algorithms and operating systems.

I particularly enjoyed the computer interfacing & instrumentation course, where the I was able to turn good thinking into reality and designed a programmable display board with 8086 microprocessor kit as a project work. I am fascinated by data communication and computer networking techniques and have an enormous interest in evaluating how advanced communication technologies are adopted by societies.

My experience as an optimization engineer in the radio access network of GSM operator, Orascom Telecom developed y skills in optimizing radio networks in terms of capacity and quality. Specifically, I was involved in optimizing the user mobile interface of a GSM cellular network with capacity planning, maintaining an optimal grade of service while minimizing the interference level being my main responsibilities. Orascom Telecom presented opportunities to work with the *** Telecommunication product and acquire a clear understanding of the concepts involved in the *** Radio Base stations and Base stations Controllers. As an expert end-user of *** radio products, I am skilled in optimization of the radio parameters. such as coverage, capacity and the radio parameters, which are (different to/applicable to) (choose one) many other radio systems.

In order to demonstrate my project management skills I would like to offer an example of one of the successfully technical project during my tenure. I coordinated the IBM Metrica Performance Manager installation and upgrade project. This is a real time performance management application, which helps to optimize network infrastructure and improve the availability. As a technical coordinator, I set up the interfacing with base station controllers, designed the database queries and documented the technical issues.

I have attended a language course in order to improve my knowledge of German and to better understand the German culture. I am also fluent in English and Bengali. My previous working experience in an international multilingual company leads me to believe I will adapt well to a new environment and I have also learned the commitment necessary to succeed as an individual and as a member of a team.

I have a long held love of research , which was confirmed at the AAAA University of Science and Technology. I worked hard to gain admission to at the Stuttgart University in the prestigious INFOTECH department. I view my entry in XXX as a great opportunity and am prepared to work hard to pursue success in my M.Sc. The worldwide reputation of *** has achieved for its goods enduring design, durability and high levels of performance mean that getting a scholarship from *** will provide a great opportunity, that I will be sure to value and I hope, return in hard work.

I should be proud of to be a member of the *** family.

I look forward to hearing from you in the future and wish you my best,
Hi,

Thanks a lot for ur suggestion.

Bishwa