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hi,

im trying to write an increment letter for my boss.

here is my draft

With due respect, I would like to bring to your attention about my salary increment.

In our interview three months ago, I was told that I would receive a salary increase of AED 200 after my six-month probation period. However, I would like to request if you could decrease my probation period into three months and after that I would receive my salary increment.

I would be very grateful if you could look into the matter.
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lordlynjoytabalusDear Mr xxxxxxx,
In our interview three months ago, I was told that I would receive a salary increase of AED 200 after my six-month probation period. However, I am hoping that you could decrease my probation period to three months, implementing the pay increase earlier.

I would be very grateful if you could look into the matter.

I would have thought your course of action should be to discuss this face to face. You accepted the 6-month rule at interview, so need to have a really good reason for any change.
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November 10, 2008.

The Manager HR,
ABC Company,

Subject: Salary Increment

Dear Sir,

With reference to the above subject, I would like to request you that I am working in your .... department as a .........

I am very thankful to you for giving me an opportunity to learn and work under your dynamic leadership. I understand that according to the company policy I will be granted salary increase after six months probation period.

I therefore request you to please consider this matter and permit me to have 3 months cut off in probation period.

Thank you for your kindness.

Yours sincerely,

ABC
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