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Dear Ms.Nguyen,

I am writing on behalf of the president of the FELTE Youth Council to request your permission to fund our new project called “The Melody of Souls” which my team and AC4U club are cooperating to carry out this autumn.

“The Melody of Souls” is a project that aims to connect faculty students. Each student attending university requires them to adjust to a new environment with new people right away, which can be stressful and exhausting. This project will assist students in getting to know one another through a different method called music. Music can heal those scratched souls, so we chose music to spread out the positive energy. Every month, we will convene a meeting with representatives from all classes to collaborate on a faculty song. Any challenge in life, or joy from friends, might be reflected in the lyrics.

Our project lets students relieve stress in daily life and allows them to show off their talents that they rarely do. We hope to be supported by the teachers, and we want to apply for funding from the faculty. The amount required is about 20 million. We will rent the audio system and musical instruments for the students with that fund, and if the faculty can provide us, we will be very grateful. This fund can help us keep the project going while also improves the image of the faculty. It also demonstrates that the faculty is concerned about the mental health of students.

I hope that you will forgive me for troubling you with this matter. I would be grateful if you can keep me informed about your last decision. Thank you in anticipation of your cooperation.

Yours sincerely,

Trang

Le Quynh Trang

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Is this a business email, or is it an exercise for your English class?

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Dear Ms.Nguyen,

I am writing on behalf of the president of the FELTE Youth Council to request your permission to fund our new project called “The Melody of Souls.” which My team and the AC4U club are collaborating to start it in the fall. are cooperating to carry out this autumn.

“The Melody of Souls” is a project that aims to connect faculty students. Each student attending university for the first time has to requires them to adjust to a new environment and with new people right away, which and that can be stressful and exhausting. This project will assist students in getting to know one another through a different method called music. Music can be soothing and healing, heal those scratched souls, so we will choose chose music to spread out the that emanates positive energy. Every month, we will convene a meeting with representatives from all classes to collaborate on a faculty song composed by a faculty member. Any challenge in life, or joy from friends, might be reflected in the lyrics.

Our project lets not only enables students to relieve stress in daily life and but also allows them to show off their latent talents that they rarely do. We hope to be supported by the teachers, and we want to apply for funding from the faculty. The amount required is about 20 million dollars. We will rent the audio system and musical instruments for the students with that fund, and if the faculty can donate some of it provide us, we will be very grateful. This fund can help us keep the project going while also improves and will improve the image of the faculty. It also demonstrates that the faculty is concerned about the mental health of students.

I hope that you will forgive me for troubling you with this matter. I would be grateful if you can keep me informed about your last decision. Thank you in anticipation of your cooperation.

Yours sincerely,

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It is an exercise for my English class. And I need some help from someone to check grammar, vocabulary, cohesion in this letter

Lê Thảo 439It is an exercise for my English class.

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