I would be very grateful if some one could kindly correcte, improve or simply make any changes (or if you have another one or another idea how to write it) to this letter. Ponctuation, separation of paragraphs, make the text more formal.

I would like to consult the Marketing Officer who is in charge of my dossier, of the possibility to suspend my studies for a specific period of time, could be 01 year. I would like to stress that I heven`t been in any interview so not yet sure to get the job, but would now if there is any possibility.

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I hope you are doing well and I would like to consult you about the possibility to suspend my studies for a specific periode of time, could be 01y starting from the end of my english course.

As you know, I found it quite hard to find a suitable part time job, wherever I go they ask about the UK experience. On the other hand I have been offred for several times full-time job opportunities in my field (there is no part time position as prpject controller), this does not mean I got the job since I have not done any interview, so actually I`m not sure if I could have got it or not?. I thought that would be interesting to try one of these oppotunities and if successeful spend the MFP/MBA studies in order to get the UK experience and probably get some extrat money to support myself more comfortably. Would you please let me know if there is any possibility to do this.



Yours sincerely,



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Thanks

I would like to ask you about the possibility of suspending my studies for a specific period of time, possibly one year, from the end of my English course.

As you know, I have found it quite hard to find a suitable part-time job as wherever I go they ask if I have any UK experience. On the other hand, I have been offered interviews for several full-time job opportunities in my field (there are no part-time positions as a project controller). I have not attended any interviews yet. I thought that it would be interesting to go for one of these opportunities and, if successful, suspend my MFP/MBA studies in order to get UK work experience and some extra money to support myself more comfortably. Would you please let me know if it would be possible to do this? I do not have any firm job offer at the moment.

Please, if someone could help me with a letter of how to apply for one year suspension of my studies from my masters programme.

It's urgent.


Than you.