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Hi.

I'm writing a letter to
thank my teacher and I'm not sure about grammar, especially about sequence of
tenses. Could you look at it and give me some advice? I would be so grateful.

So, the letter:

"Before
my studies in LC, before I ever learned English, I had been sure it's
impossible for me to speak any foreign language. I had thought I had had no
ability for doing it. / is it right to use past perfect here? /

Despite this, I forced myself to go to the LC and applied for a course.
I was met by a friendly young man who assured me that in three years I would
speak English as well as the Queen of England does /or did?/. Well, I trusted him
and now I know I’ve made a right decision.

After my first year in LC I saw plainly that English is not as difficult
as I ever thought. I even liked it in a manner. But you, ‘my teacher’s name’,
made me realize one thing: learning English is not just learning English, it’s
a whole world with a grief and kickshaws, ups and downs. I really enjoy each
your lesson, and if come in a bad mood I leave a classroom with a smile playing
on my lips. For all this you must take full credit.

You’re the best teacher. Thank you." 

Something like that, you know. Thanks
in advance, Dmitry.
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Hi,

"Before my studies in LC, before I ever learned English, I had been sure it's impossible for me to speak any foreign language. I had thought I had had no ability for doing it. / is it right to use past perfect here? /

Despite this, I forced myself to go to the LC and applied for a course. I was met by a friendly young man who assured me that in three years I would speak English as well as the Queen of England does /or did?/. Well, I trusted him and now I know I’ve made a right decision.

After my first year in LC I saw plainly that English is not as difficult as I ever thought. I even liked it in a manner. But you, ‘my teacher’s name’, made me realize one thing: learning English is not just learning English, it’s a whole world with a grief and kickshaws, ups and downs. I really enjoy each your lesson, and if come in a bad mood I leave a classroom with a smile playing on my lips. For all this you must take full credit.

You’re the best teacher. Thank you."

"Before my studies in LC, before I ever learned English, I was sure it was impossible for me to speak any foreign language. I thought I had no ability for it.

Despite this, I forced myself to go to LC and apply for a course. I was met by a friendly young man who assured me that in three years I would speak English as well as the Queen of England does. Well, I trusted him and now I know I made the right decision.

After my first year in LC I saw plainly that English is not as difficult as I ever thought. I even liked it in a way. But you, ‘my teacher’s name’, made me realize one thing: learning English is not just learning English, it’s a whole world with grief and kickshaws ???? , ups and downs. I really enjoy each of your lessons, and if I come in a bad mood I leave the classroom with a smile playing on my lips. For all this you must take full credit.

You’re the best teacher. Thank you."

Clive

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Hi DIm:

"Before my studies in LC, before I ever learned English, I had been was sure it's would be impossible for me to speak any foreign language. I had thought I had had no ability for doing it. / is it right to use past perfect here? (it's OK, but simple past is more natural)/
Despite this, I forced myself to go to the LC and applyied (to go ... to apply - the and connects the two infinitive forms.) for a course.
I was met by a friendly young man who assured me that in three years I would
speak English as well as the Queen of England does /or did?/. (normally, a verb is not added - as well as the Queen of England (speaks/does). Well, I trusted him and now I know I’ve made the right decision.
After my first year in LC I saw plainly that English is not as difficult
as I ever thought. I even liked it in a manner of speaking.(in a manner of speaking - an idiom meaning in some way or other) But you, ‘my teacher’s name’,
made me realize one thing: learning English is not just learning English, it’s
a whole world with a grief and kickshaws(? - a good idiom is "a world of grief") - you might mean oddities?, ups and downs. I really enjoy each of
your lessons (or "each lesson"), and if come in a bad mood, I leave the classroom with a smile playing
on my lips. For all this you must take full credit.
You’re the best teacher. Thank you."

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Excellent letter, Dim - you have indeed suffered through the grief of learning our strange and wonderful language...
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Well,
firstly thanks. I feel like a silly schoolboy. But it’s good for all people to be subjected
to criticism from time to time.
AlpheccaStarsyou have indeed suffered through the grief of learning our strange and wonderful language...
No, I haven't. I'm suffering, in fact. And my English is getting better (I hope at leastEmotion: smile).
Thanks again, you've really helped me.
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Before my studies at LC ( is LC a school? if LC is a school on first reference you have to say the entire name)), before I never learned English, I had been sure thought it was would be impossible for me to speak a foreign language. I had thought, I had had no did not have the ability to do it.

Despite this, I forced myself to go to the LC and applied for a course. I was met by a friendly young man who assured me that in three years I would be able to speak English as well as the Queen of England does. Well, I trusted him and now I know I've made a the right decision.

After my first year in at LC, I clearly saw that English is not as difficult as I ever thought. I even liked it in a manner. But you, ‘my teacher's name', made me realize one thing that learning English is not just learning English, it's a whole world with a grief and kickshaws, ups and downs. I really

enjoy your lesson lectures and if come came to class in a bad mood I left the classroom with a smile playing on my lips on my face. For all of this you must take full credit.

You're the best teacher, Thank you."

Cool story!!!