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Please proofread for me. Thank you!

Hi Loretta,

Yah! Traveling has been a big part of my life and I don't think I'll ever be able to not take a trip here and there once in a while. I love to globe trot around the world to visit friends or see different cultures and meet new people when I get a chance. Maybe next time we could plan a trip and travel to somewhere we've both never been. That would be such an adventure, wouldn't it? I've always wanted to go to Hawaii, that's one place that's been on my list of places to visit for the longest time. Somewhere tropical with a nice beach should be good during the summer. Anyway, I've got a new number, what's your number?

Love,

Shaniee
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Yeah! Traveling has been a big part of my life and I don't think I'll ever be able not to take a trip here and there once in a while. I love to globe trot around the world to visit friends or see different cultures and meet new people when I get a chance. Maybe next time we could plan a trip and travel to somewhere we've both never been. That would be such an adventure, wouldn't it? I've always wanted to go to Hawaii. That's one place that's been on my list of places to visit for the longest time. Somewhere tropical with a nice beach should be good during the summer. Anyway, I've got a new number, what's your number?

I would only make those three changes.

CJ
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I agree with "to not take". ......for example...... 'I never know whether to take or to not take his advice.'