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A local magazine editor has asked for readers opinion. Write a letter to magazine editor;

  • describe what made you choose this magazine.
  • what do you like and dislike about it
  • what improvements do you want to see

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to provide an opinion on your weekly magazine.

I read this magazine because it highlights some important issues of our country including economic ones. Recently, it mentioned about air pollution which is a main problem and described the ways for solving it.

The causes of pollution highlighted in the magazine were liked by everyone in my friend circle because these are the real unremitting issues. However, the solutions mentioned were inappropriate as you forgot to write factories’ contribution which is the main factor in the generation of pollution.

I trust you will amend the article because it has caught public attention, and everyone talks about it even in government offices. I would like you to include some numbers published in the latest report of World Health Organization in France.

Should you require any help in this regard or further comments, please let me know.

Yours faithfully,

John Adams

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Try to take a broader perspective here. Do not focus on just one example. Make a list of what you like about the magazine, and another list about what you don't like. Write a paragraph for each list. Then write one paragraph about how the magazine can be improved.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a regular reader of your magazine and writing this letter to provide my views so that you can make relevant changes in it.

This newsletter is a complete package as it provides the relevant section for each member of our family and this was the primary reason of choosing it. It does not only cover health related tips for elderly people and games for children, but also the current affairs for adults.

The things which I particularly like in this magazine are financial news and update on the prices of various investment avenues, such as real-estate property prices, commodity prices and prices of shares listed on the global stock exchanges. However, I detest the fact that you only publish a physical copy of this magazine and do not issue its online version. Besides, it hardly covers local news that many people want to read.

I want you to focus more on domestic news and cover the local stories. Also, try to publish its online copies as users of the internet has been increasing for last few years.

Should you need further comments, please let me know.

Yours faithfully,

John Adams

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