The amount of crime under 18 years old is rising rapidly in many countries in the world. There are several reasons for this issue and various measures can be taken by governments, parents and schools to improve this situation.
First of all, much research has shown that nearly all youth crime is from poor children from the slum. Children who live in the slum will be affected by bad things like drunk,violence,and drugs. It will make a bad habit and behaviour for them. Secondly, children without care from their parents. These days, many parents are busy with their work so they don’t have time to care about their child, they can’t control the thinking of their child.
There are some methods that I believe can make this situation better. The first thing that I think is to prevent society’s vice from the slum, the government should make a budget for poor children from the slum to help them go to school and take care of them. Furthermore, parents play a vital role in helping reduce levels of young crime, they should spend more time with their child, play with their sons more to make a strong link between parents and sons to teach them how to become a good person.
In brief, parents and habitat are very critical for the growth of children, we need to improve them to reduce the proportion of youth crime in the world, it is very easy if we know how to do it right.
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Topic: Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
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The amount of crime under 18 years old is rising rapidly in many countries in the world. There are several reasons for this issue and various measures can be taken by governments, parents and schools to improve this situation.
First of all, much research has shown that nearly all youth crime is from poor children from the slum. Children who live in the slum will be affected by bad things like drunk,violence,and drugs. It will make a bad habit and behaviour for them. Secondly, children without care from their parents. These days, many parents are busy with their work so they don’t have time to care about their child, they can’t control the thinking of their child.
There are some methods that I believe can make this situation better. The first thing that I think is to prevent society’s vice from the slum, the government should make a budget for poor children from the slum to help them go to school and take care of them. Furthermore, parents play a vital role in helping reduce levels of young crime, they should spend more time with their child, play with their sons more to make a strong link between parents and sons to teach them how to become a good person.
In brief, parents and habitat are very critical for the growth of children, we need to improve them to reduce the proportion of youth crime in the world, it is very easy if we know how to do it right.
The amount of crime under 18 years old (That means the offense was committed less than 18 years ago. It is not what you want to say.) is rising rapidly in many countries in the world. There are several reasons for this issue and various measures can be taken by governments, parents and schools to improve this situation.
First of all, much research has shown that nearly all youth crime is committed by from poor children from the slums. Children who live in the slums will be affected by bad things like drunk,violence,and (missing spaces Also, "drunk" is an adjective. not a noun. You need the noun - "drunkenness" ) drugs. It will make a them acquire bad habits and behaviour for them. Secondly, Second, children without care from their parents. There is not verb in that phrase. It is not a sentence.) These days, many parents are busy with their work so they don’t (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) have time to care about their child, Families usually have more than one child.) they can’t control the thinking of their child.
There are some methods that I believe can make this situation better. The first thing that I think is to will prevent crimes society’s vice from the slum, (Your sentence is not properly constructed. It is not grammatical. ) is for the government to should make a budget for poor children from the slum to help them go to school and take care of them. Furthermore, parents play a vital role in helping reduce levels of young crime, (wrong punctuation. Run-on sentence) they should spend more time with their child, play with their sons more to make a strong link between parents and sons and to teach them how to become a good person. (Your sentence is not properly constructed. It is not grammatical. )
In brief, parents and habitat (wrong usage) are very critical for the growth of children, (wrong punctuation. Run-on sentence) we need to improve them (The parents?) to reduce the proportion of youth crime in the world, (wrong punctuation. Run-on sentence) it is very easy if we know how to do it right.