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In few recent years, there have been growing concerns from the community about students’ life in university. This led to the question whether it is excellent to live far-off from home instead of abiding at home with parents. In this essay, I will elaborate several reasons why I totally agree with this statement. On the one hand, inhabiting with parents may bring two following benefits. It is undeniable that it can help students have minimization of potential homesickness during college life. In fact, an anxiety caused by separation from family members will disapear obviously as everyone is going to catch each other in the same space named house. Second, one of the greatest perks of living at home is the luxury of having the time to sit and think extensively about career decisions. Clearly, there are always dad and mom who are willing to stand by their daughter to share experience and give outright advice which could assist to figure out which occupation they should follow. To illustrate, my cousin is a third-year student majoring in business management and regularly has small talks with her parents working as businesspeople to gain more working knowledge which is useful for making decisions in the future. On the other hand, choosing leave home might engender two succeeding advantages. First of all, students would experience something different for four years. Obviously, there are several new things which being next to mom or dad in rural area could not get, such as reaching many people or approaching cutting-edge technology. Living distantly parents would let students have more freetime to step out and make friends, which could expand their relationship network at the beginning. Another merit is most of educational institutes are located far away from students’ hometown. To be more specific, professional universities where have proper facilities and distinguished professors usually tend to congrerate in big cities. As proof, top 500 universities of Vietnam are located in the two biggest cities which are in HCM and Hanoi city. In conclusion, I agree completely that students would be better to live far away from home than populate with parents.

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Anhhhh00I will elaborate several reasons why I totally agree with this statement.

Which statement are you agreeing with? You wrote two statements:

1. In few recent years, there have been growing concerns from the community about students’ life in university. (You agree that there are growing concerns about the life of university students.)

2. This led to the question whether it is excellent to live far-off from home instead of abiding at home with parents. ( You agree that this led to a question.)

Please be very clear about what you agree with.