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It is generally believed that language barrier is the biggest obstacle for people who live aboard, because it may cause some major communal issue also practical challenges. I strongly dissent from this statement. Technology and internet are developing significantly, so it will be easier for people to learn foreign language, and people are provided a great condition by living aboard.

Nowadays, many country have better technology for communication also education; as the result, learning a new foreign is really accessible. Lots of language learning program are created, and most of them are free and suitable for many people, and some of program are bilingual; thus, people who going to study a new language will receive help by these programs. In addition, on the internet, there are many online languages courses, so people are able to stay at home and join the class,and most these course are expensive, but there are also some of them are organized for free, accordingly it will be useful for living aboard students who do not have enough money to pay for a course.

Furthermore, living overseas is the best method to learn foreign languages. People who live in a different country will have a better opportunity to meet new foreigner; hence, they can make a lot of friends. Consequently, they will have more knowledge about their culture and easily learn the language.

In conclusion, with the mass improvement of science and technology, and with the benefits of living overseas then social and practical problems will not be a big issue for them.

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Topic: : Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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You need to review articles (a, the, an) and plural forms of nouns. You make a lot of mistakes. Also, you overuse the semicolon. It must not be used very often. Maybe one or two times, no more, in an essay.


It is generally believed that the language barrier is the biggest obstacle for people who live aboard, (This word means "on a ship / on a bus") because it may cause some major communal (wrong word) issue (wrong form, missing conjunction) also practical challenges. I strongly dissent from disagree with this statement. Technology and internet are developing rapidly and translation apps will make it significantly, so it will be easier for people to learn a foreign language, and people are provided a great condition (I do not understand this part.) by living aboard.

Nowadays, many country (wrong form) have better technology for communication also education; as the a result, learning a new foreign ("Foreign is an adjective. It must have a noun after it) is really accessible. (wrong form) Lots of language learning program (wrong form) are being created, and most of them are free and suitable for many people, and some of program (wrong expression) are bilingual; thus, people who going (wrong form) to study a new language will receive help from by these programs. In addition, on the internet, there are many online languages courses, so people are able to stay at home and join the class,and most these course (wrong form) are expensive, but there are also some of them are organized (ungrammatical ) for free, ((wrong punctuation, comma splice error ) accordingly it will be useful for living aboard students (wrong word order, wrong word) who do not have enough money to pay for a course.

Furthermore, living overseas is the best method (wrong word. Living is not a method. ) to learn foreign languages. People who live in a different country will have a better opportunity to meet new foreigner; hence, they can make a lot of friends. Consequently, they will have more knowledge about their culture and easily learn the language.

In conclusion, with the mass improvement of science (Science is the study of the natural world. It does not change, either getting better or worse.) and technology, and with the benefits of living overseas then social and practical problems will not be a big issue for them. (who?)

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AlpheccaStarsIn addition, on the internet, there are many online languages courses, so people are able to stay at home and join the class

I would prefer "Can" rather than "Are able to" in this context since this is not related to a specific event.

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Crystal RhodesI would prefer "Can" rather than "Are able to" in this context since this is not related to a specific event.

There is basically no difference between "can" and "are able to". That is why I did not mark the original text as incorrect or unnatural.

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There were so many errors with the usage of plural and singular forms that I did not mark every one of them. This one was overlooked.