Hello mates.

On the beginning I would like to say, that I have been looking for a board like this for the years. I can't belive I found it !Emotion: smile (And who's realdeleted:modEmotion: stick out tongue )
Let me tell you a little about myself. I am 17 years boy, who lives in Poland. I learn English for a few years (but it still sux Emotion: stick out tongue ), and I am looking for a help with my English. I hope so you are gonna help me.

Ok let's startEmotion: smile

I have a homework to my school, which is:

"You have the name and address pf an English language student in another country. Write them a short letter in which you:

- introduce yourself
-describe your everyday routine
- say what you like doing in you free time."

Dear Piotrek,

My name is Jacek and I am 17 years old. I live in Wroclaw, in Poland, with my parents and sister. Now I am learning in secondary
school in a class mathematical - computer-science.
Let me tell you a little about my everyday routine. I usually wake up at 7.20 a.m. After washing myself and eating breakfast
I get a bus to school. After school, usually about 4 p.m I start doing my homeworks. I hate that, but you know it doesn't depend
on me. I often go sleep about 12 pm.
Now I am going to tell you something about my activities that I enjoy in my free time. Almost all my free time I spend
surfing the internet. I love this. Actually I think it is one of the best "things" which have ever been
invented. I am not able to tell you, how many times I spend surfing the Internet, because during doing this I am cut off off from the rest
of the world. Of course the internet is not the only thing I love. Sleeping is a second thing, but what should I write you
about that ? Actually, I think, I do not have to explain anyone anything about sleeping.

Write soon and tell me about you !

Best wishes, Jacek
Hi Jacek,

This is a nice chatty letter and quite nicely written. You should take a second look at these parts though:in a class; often go sleep;"things" which have; tell you, how many times; during doing this;is a second thing; anyone anything.

In addtition, I deleted a word from your question as it is one which most people find highly offensive. I understand it is used in some contexts, but this is usually in a 'peer-group' situation (and that is highly controversial ) and you should be wary of using it without knowing who will encounter it. What a black rap singer can get away with (although still offending some people) with is one thing, but what you can post on the internet is something else. Not suitable for this forum, thanks.
nona the brit,

I had seen that too and wasn't sure what to make of it. Glad you are more adept at this than I am.

MountainHiker
Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?
Hello,

On the beginning I'd like to thank you for your help. I really appreciate that. According to this word (you know which oneEmotion: wink ), it's true I heard it in some song, and belive me I didn't mean anything bad.

And according to my letter. I also wasn't sure about these parts which you pasted, but I have no idea how I should fix it. Can you tell me what's bad in these sentences. Are they incomprehensible or maybe something with gramma ?

I am looking forward to your replayEmotion: smile

Thank in advance.

Jacek

Edit:

I tried to correct my letter. I hope so it's better.

Dear Piotrek,

My name is Jacek and I am 17 years old. I live in Wroclaw, in Poland, with my parents and sister. Now I am learning in a one of Wroclaw secondary school in a class with a widen maths.

Let me tell you a little about my everyday routine. I usually wake up at 7.20 a.m. After washing myself and eating breakfast I get a bus to school. After school, usually about 4 p.m I start doing my homeworks. I hate that, but you know it doesn't depend on me. I often go to bad about 12 pm.

Now I am going to tell you something about my activities that I enjoy in my free time. Almost all my free time I spend surfing the internet. I love this. Actually, I think it is one of the best things which have ever been invented, but it has one minus, people during surfing are cut off from the rest of the world (they don't know what's going on around them).

Write soon and tell me about you !

Best wishes, Jacek

If you have some suggestions, please write about them asap, because I have to give it my teacher tommorow .... and remember I wake up at 7.20 a.m Emotion: big smile Emotion: stick out tongue

CheersEmotion: smile
Hi Jacek,

Try these

'I am currently studying maths and computers at a secondary school in Wroclaw.

Homework is a non-count noun so the plural is still homework.

I usually go to bed(I'm sure you don't go bad after midnight, you sound like something from a horror movie!Emotion: stick out tongue )

..the activities I enjoy in my free time..

Good luck with your assignment.

With regards to the word, yes I guessed you picked it up from a song, I would advise not using it though.