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Hello,

I want to send the following message to one of my contacts asking him to help me to find a job.

Kindly review it and let me know if it doesn't sound English.

Also Please keep into your consideration that It's true that I have an experience in marketing and PR but I don't mind to work in a different industry and change my career.

The message:

Dear ... ,

I was wondering If you can give me a hand in finding a job.

I’m looking for a job in marketing or PR fields.

Currently I live in Kuwait, but If I get a serious offer, I don’t mind at all to move back to Egypt or any other place in the world.

If you can help, kindly send me your e-mail address so I can pass you my resume.

Thanks a lot.
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Dear Speedoz,

Here is my edition of your letter. I have left it in the informal style you adopted because you said you intended to send it to a contact you know. Please bear in mind that this letter is extremely informal and that I advise you to send it only to someone you know fairly well.

Cheers,

John

Dear ... ,

I was wondering If you could give me a hand in finding a job?

I’m looking for a position in either the marketing or PR fields.

Currently I live in Kuwait, but If I get a serious offer, I woudn't mind moving back to Egypt or any other country in the world.

If you can help, I would appreciate your email address so that I can send you a copy of my resumé (CV).

Thanks very much.
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Yes, I will send it to a closed friend

Thank you very much for your help Emotion: smile