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Can the sentence tug your heartstring? If not, polish it please:

1) If loving you is a sin, I'd commit it again and again.
2) If falling for you was a mistake, I'd rather have it repeated forever!
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Can the sentences tug your heartstrings? -- Sure they can!

1) 'If loving you is a sin, I'd commit it again and again.' Great!

2) 'If falling for you was a mistake, I'd repeat it forever.' The shorter form is more effective.
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Many thinks to Mr. Micawber for his excellent guidance! Emotion: big smile