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hi you guys. this is my first post and i really need help to make sure this purpose statement is gramatically correct.

"The research paper will inform the audience of the many factors of obestiy and how it affects people, and solutions to aid the disorder."

Critics are welcomed much.
Thankyou!
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Hi,

Welcome to the Forum.

This is my first post and i really need help to make sure this purpose statement is gramatically correct.

"The research paper will inform the audience of the many factors of obestiy and how it affects people, and solutions to aid the disorder."

Your sentence needs work. I suggest this.

"This research paper will inform the audience about obesity. It will discuss its many causes, its effects on people, and solutions to the disorder."

Best wishes, Clive
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thank you so much clive.

your help really means alot to me.

mahalo, Deandra