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Making the world more like the heaven:

The world can never be a heaven because whatever we create or make, we need to follow the laws of nature. We can't change the laws of nature. What we can is just that we can make use of our ideals and the behaviour of matters and energy. However, the following are the five things which if them we can give people for free, we would have more freedom on earth:

Free-food: We know everything is energy and there are many kinds of energy which are so much in universe. We eat food to have energy that helps us grow and keep alive. If we can create a machine that can transform energy into food, we wouldn't have the lack of food any more. We also don't have to do jobs or business to make money for food.

Sex-robot: If we can give everyone a sex robot, we would no longer have to get married and give birth to children.

Safety: Safety is a must to have. We can also create robots for our safety.

Cloth: We can make robots for making cloths.

Perfect-translator: Making a translator that would perfectly translate one language into another could free us from leaning a new language. We no longer have to struggle to learn foreign languages like now. We can communicate with any countries' people so freely.

Our world can never be a heaven, but doing these five things, we can take our world more closer to heaven.

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Making the world more like the heaven:

The world can never be a heaven because whatever we create or make, we need to follow the laws of nature. We can't change the laws of nature. What we can do is just that we can make use of our ideals and the behaviour of matters and energy. However, the following are the five things which, if them we can give people for free, we would have more freedom on earth. (Is freedom heaven?)

Free-food: We know everything is energy and ( According to the latest theories, there is matter and energy, dark matter and dark energy. ) there are many kinds of energy which are so much in the universe. We eat food to have energy that helps us grow and stay keep alive. If we can create a machine that can transform energy into food, we wouldn't have the lack of food any more. (Actually such a machine already exists in nature! It is called photosynthesis. ) We also don't have to do jobs or business to make money for food.

Sex-robot: If we can give everyone a sex robot, we would no longer have to get married and give birth to children. (So an earth without human life would be heaven and freedom. With no children being born, after all the existing humans died, there would be no more Homo Sapiens. That was the situation for 99.85% of the total history of earth.)

Safety: Safety is a must to have. We can also create robots for our safety.

Cloth: We can make robots for making clothes / cloth. cloths.

Perfect-translator: Making a translator that would perfectly translate one language into another could free us from leaning a new language. We no longer have to struggle to learn foreign languages like now. We can communicate with any countries' people so freely. (If there were no humans, we would not need any translators.)

Our world can never be a heaven, but doing these five things, we can take our world more closer to heaven.

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"Our world can never be a heaven, but by doing these five things, we could take our world closer to heaven."

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Suicide-machine: There are so many people on earth who want to commit suicide, but yet they are surviving because they don't know and have the easy methods and opportunities to do it. We can make suicide-machines for them, the kind of suicide-machine I expect will have a space to put the head inside, and there will be a button that, when clicked, will cut from the top of the eyebrow to the top of the head. I think people will suffer the least if they commit suicide in this way.

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