Insightfully, there has been constant modification, which have had been noticed in some Government factors since past few decades; while, other people believe that other types of progress are also, equally significant for particular nation. Nevertheless, it seems to me that I perfectly agree with this statement and, I will address this tendency in forth coming paragraphs.
To commence with, it is clearly seen that why economic growth is magnificent because if the government takes step to increase the economy, it would be benefited for country. The best explanation is that when economy has been expanded not only better for goods, but also good for services. It can be exemplified by, invention of gasoline fuel, majority are using this invention or productive method for transporting goods and services easily in the world. Hence, it irrefutable that we cannot ignore the positive outcomes in the given notion.
Furthermore, it can be widely seen that some individuals are supported to other types if government should support to education system and technology. Development is required for modernization in schools and universities then many students can take an education easily also, technology development is mandatory for everyone due to updates and modification in technology or gadgets. For an example in present survey done a group of professionals; the majority of people cannot live without technology and, in education system dedication, determination, discipline is more essential. Therefore, government promoted these sectors it will be helped to future generation.
In conclusion, I would say that economic growth is necessary of all country.
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Topic: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. However, some people think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Economic thriving is considered as the prime factor which defines the prosperity of a country by some people. Others, however, believe that the governments should also focus on other respects to guarantee their countries’ national welfare.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that a strong economic base can ensure the successful state of a country. The affluence acommodates people with such a sufficient and comfortable life, construct better facilitated infrastructures and superstructures, and prove its political position among the other countries,...; therefore, For example, a country with a flourishing economy can invest to have a strong military base; therefore, it can stand in a sustained position of the world’s most powerful country. Hence, it is acknowledged that consolidating the economy can improve the living standard of the citizens and the country’s success.
On the other hand, education might bring more positive outcomes for the country. If the education is deliberately and thoroughly developed, its citizens might acquire a better horizon of knowledge and also code of ethics. For example, vocational or university institutions can improve the quality of the country’s labour workforce and its labours will bring an influx of money profits into the country. Beside a robust economy, a nation needs a culture of pure morals in order to maintain a positive society and protect its security for a long term. Thus, providing proper education might be of more importance because with the values stated above, a top structure might establish a foundation for an eternal success.
In conclusion, I believe focusing on education might generate more positive consequences for a state than strengthening the economy.
Thanh BinhEconomic thriving
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