In the last few years engineering has changed
dramatically. Several years ago the engineers working on a joint project needed to be in the same office in order to be able to exchange information between them.

Internet has changed significantly the speed and mobility of engineering. The Network gave possibilities for electronic collaboration.

It is no longer necessary for the designers to work in the same office. Each of them having Internet connection can participate in the development of the projects. Using the Network made it possible to develop projects by designers and engineers residing all around the world. Developing a project using this way can be very successful.
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In the last few years engineering has changed dramatically. Several years ago the engineers working on a joint project needed to be in the same office in order to be able to exchange information between amongst themselves.

The Internet has changed significantly changed the speed and mobility of engineering. The Network It has gave possibilities provided opportunities for electronic collaboration.

It is no longer necessary for the designers to work in the same office. Each of them having an Internet connection can participate in the development of (the) projects. Using the Network Internet has made it possible to the development of projects by designers and engineers residing all around over the world. Developing a project using in this way can be very successful.

Thanks! But don't understand why "The Internet".