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Hi,there

I translated a medical records. Before showed to a doctor, I want your honest opinion.Any sugesstion is appreciated.

Summary for discharge from hospital

Hospitalized Period: July 17th, 2006 to July 31th, 2006

Diagnosis for discharge: Anosteotomy operation for the correction of deformity for both shanks(or lower limbs?) had been
performed.

Condition when hospitalized: To be hospitalized one year ago due to congenital valgus deformities of both feet.
After the osteotomy operation for the correction of deformity for both shanks, expression
and vital sign was instable.

Treatment: To dismantle internal fixation and suture incision.

Condition when discharge: Incision well-healed. Discharged after sutures out.

Medical order: Be careful about food choices (or Watch your diet?)

Thank you in advance
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I would make a few small corrections and remove unneeded words. My new changes are in boldface:

Summary for discharge from hospital

Hospitalization Period: July 17th to July 31th, 2006

Diagnosis upon discharge: An osteotomy operation for the correction of deformities in both lower limbs had been performed.

Condition when hospitalized: Previously hospitalized one year ago due to congenital valgus deformities of both feet.
After the osteotomy operation, expression and vital signs were instable.

Treatment: To dismantle internal fixation and remove sutures.

Condition when discharged: Incision well-healed. Discharged after sutures removed.

Medical order: Be careful about food choices.
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Thanks a million for your correction, Doctor D. This is really a big help.

It seems I got wrong about one sentence,

I change my work to this

Treatment: To dismantle internal fixation and close the incision with sutures.
That makes better sense. Your wording there is fine.
Hello Sandy,

I am herewith furnishing the possible subheadings in the discharge summary. Please go through the following subheadings in the

discharg summary.

Possible HEADINGS and SUBHEADINGS for the DISCHARGE SUMMARY
DISCHARGE SUMMARY
ADMITTING DIAGNOSIS:
HISTORY OF PRESENT ILLNESS:
PERTINENT PAST HISTORY:
LABORATORY FINDINGS:
HOSPITAL COURSE:
DISPOSITION:
FOLLOW-UP:
CONDITION ON DISCHARGE:
DISCHARGE DIAGNOSIS:
PROGNOSIS:
DISCHARGE MEDICATIONS:


Regards,

Sri
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