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A CT scan was done in the emergency room of the patient's abdome, which revealed a large amount of ascites. There was a left renal cyst. There was felt to be changes in the mesentery peritoneum system with peritoneal carcinomatosis. There were multiple hypodensities in both kidneys felt to represent cysts. The peritoneal carcinomatosis was manifested as tiny nodules throughout the mesenteric fat. There was no evidence of a abdominal aortic aneurysm. The patient was admitted for further management.

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A CT scan was done in the emergency room of the patient's abdome, which revealed a large amount of ascites. There was a left renal cyst. There was felt to be changes in the mesentery peritoneum system with peritoneal carcinomatosis. There were multiple hypodensities in both kidneys felt to represent cysts. The peritoneal carcinomatosis was manifested as tiny nodules throughout the mesenteric fat. There was no evidence of a abdominal aortic aneurysm. The patient was admitted for further management.

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A CT scan of the patient's abdomen was done in the emergency room, which revealed a large amount of ascites. There was a left renal cyst. There were felt to be changes in the mesentery peritoneum system with peritoneal carcinomatosis. There were multiple hypodensities in both kidneys, felt to represent cysts. The peritoneal carcinomatosis was manifested as tiny nodules throughout the mesenteric fat. There was no evidence of an abdominal aortic aneurysm. The patient was admitted for further management.

Clive
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Anonymous A CT scan was done in the emergency room of the patient's abdome, which revealed a large amount of ascites. There was a left renal cyst. There was felt to be changes in the mesentery peritoneum system with peritoneal carcinomatosis. There were multiple hypodensities in both kidneys felt to represent cysts. The peritoneal carcinomatosis was manifested as tiny nodules throughout the mesenteric fat. There was no evidence of a abdominal aortic aneurysm. The patient was admitted for further management. Is any of these sentences grammarly correct in my paragraph?
This is what I got for this one. There was felt to be changes in the mesentery, or consistent with peritoneal carcinomatosis.