Is the sentence ok, especially the phrase in blue? Thank you in advance.

Enchanted by happy/merry and harmonic sounds of the engine in question a long queue was at once formed containing people interested in this super-fast, 14-meters long offshore cruiser made in Italy.
All of those words are a strange way to describe an engine noise!
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I guess I'll just leave that out. Thanks Nona.
Nona, can you check the rest of the sentence? Thank you
The rest is fine...
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Hi Nona, thank you for checking my sentence. I quess the queue containing is ok?