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Dear,

I am writing to express my great interest in applying for the PhD program in your research group.

In September 2019, I completed Master degree supervised by ***** at ******* University, Nepal.
During my academic years, I was attend conferences/workshops on material science and doing the research on 2D TMDcs. The Structural, Electronic, Optical, external field and optical properties are studied. These experiences provide me the training and therefore skills as well as innovations in the materials of condensed matter physics.


After my Master, I working as an project assistant at ******Lab, Nepal. I gained further understanding of academic principles and experiences in computational as well as experiment, project application and team-working.


Now I am keenly interested and highly motivated in the field of Ab-initio calculations and modeling of new materials. Your program covers areas of research that match my interests.

As well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. It makes me confident that I will be suitable for your research team.

Now my curriculum vitae (CV) is enclosed . If further information is needed, please feel free to let me know.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you earlier.

Yours sincerely,

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It is not the best motivation letter since the level of motivation is rather mundane and lukewarm. It is a good cover letter, that gives a high-level summary of information that is (or should be) on your CV.



Dear,

I am writing to express my great interest in applying for the PhD program in your research group.

In September 2019, I completed my Master degree supervised by ***** at ******* University, Nepal.
During my academic years, I was attend conferences and workshops on material science and doing the research on 2D TMDcs. (Write out an acronym the first time it is mentioned) The Structural, Electronic, Optical, external field and optical properties are studied. These experiences provide me the training and therefore skills as well as innovations (Innovations cannot be provided.) in the materials of condensed matter physics.


After my Master, I working as an project assistant at ******Lab, Nepal. I gained further understanding of academic principles and experiences in computational as well as experiment, project application and team-working.


Now I am keenly interested and highly motivated in the field of Ab-initio calculations and modeling of new materials. Your program covers areas of research that match my interests.

As well as my good understanding of academic principles, I am a very motivated, hardworking and effective individual. Throughout my career, I obtained a good communication and organizational skills. It makes me confident that I will be suitable for your research team.

Now myMy curriculum vitae (CV) is enclosed . If further information is needed, please feel free to let me know.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you earlier.

Yours sincerely,

Comments  

In addition to AlpheccaStars's excellent comments, you need to strengthen your letter. You can't simply say you good at x, y, and z. You need to demonstrate through prior experiences that you are, in fact, good at x, y, and z.

Here are three links that might help you.

  1. https://www.englishforums.com/content/lessons/motivation-letters-part-i.htm
  2. https://www.englishforums.com/English/SampleLetterMotivationApplication-LetterUniversity/xpzpl/post.htm
  3. https://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewMotivationLetter/pwcmp/post.htm

The third link is rather long. But it does show the process or writing and rewriting.