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Dear all,

I am asked to reply to the following three questions for an internship:

- why are you applying for this internship?

- what are your expectations?

- why are you a good candidate?

I am not asked to introduce myself and, the only restriction I have regards the number of characters (1000, spaces included). Can you correct it and provide me with feedback?


I strongly believe this internship is an opportunity not to be missed to grow under the human and professional profile. I am deeply interested in the functioning of the EU, specifically the steps required for the design and implementation of policies to stabilize the economy, given that I devoted my thesis to these topics. Hence, I would like to see first-hand this whole procedure.

In this internship, I expect to gain experience working with people who are masters in their field and know the meaning of working for a leading institution like the EU. I am also eager to put into practice all the knowledge acquired in five years of economic studies.

I think the Erasmus experience made me grow in many ways. I know what it means to be away from home, settle in a new place and meet other cultures. In the last years, I worked on my teamwork skills and acquired advanced knowledge in economics. For these reasons, I honestly believe that I am highly motivated and ready for this challenge.


Thank you in advance!

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AVto grow under the human and professional profile.

That does not make sense.

AVmeaning of working for a leading institution like the EU

Not very compelling.

AVHence, I would like to see first-hand this whole procedure.

Hence, I would like to be personally involved.

AVI honestly believe that I am highly motivated and ready for this challenge.

Remove weakness.

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Thank you for your comments! How would you substitute "to grow under the human and professional profile"? Because I cannot think about anything else.

I have no idea what "grow under a profile" means.

I am sorry!

I wanted to say that this experience might make me a better man (human) and a better worker/professional.

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AVI am sorry!

Don't be sorry, please.

Maybe what you mean is that it will prepare you for a career in government service in your home country.