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Hi,
I have problem with motivation letter , I write one, but I'm not sure that is good letter or not ? some one can help me in this ? below is my letter, please say me that what do u think about that, where is not correct , and where must be edited .
thank you .



Dear Sir or Madam,


With this letter, I would like to express my keen interest in applying for the Bachelor's Degree Program in Mechanical Engineering at the Technische Universität Clausthal, after finishing the language course from level B1 – C1 at the University Clausthal language Center .



My Name is Mohammad ALShawabkeh, I got a General Certificate of Secondary Education in 2013 at a rate 82.4. I took a German courses, and even after that I still study a bit in my free time. Although I'm in B1 level, I can understand communication between people when I ran into German speakers in my city.



I found the best solution for my case is to transfer my studies to Germany, I found Germany and its universities offer me the quality of study and teaching staff, providing opportunities for the skills I need to catch up with the age of speed, Degrees and degrees awarded by German universities.


I grew up as a boy who is eager for understanding, how a mechanism, for example, a vehicle, internally operates in a synchronous way to execute a particular function. Also, I am consistently thrilled by the challenge of disassembling a device, then reassembling it again. choosing this distinct field of study was a decision based on passion and picking out the profession, I would enjoy doing the most.



In July 2018, I trained in a car maintenance and sale company in Amman (Tawfiq Gargour & Sons is the sole and exclusive agent for Mercedes-Benz cars in Jordan, which has a close and fruitful partnership with Daimler; Mercedes-Benz manufacturer.) for a month and a half. I moved to the different sections of the company. I worked with the technicians. I learned many new things about the work system and how to do it.



I chose to study at the Technische Universität Clausthal because it is one of the strongest German universities in the field of engineering, In Clausthal there are suitable conditions for concentration, You can find quiet places to study and professors can be reached easily. Also Clausthal University is one of the German universities characterized by low tuition fees.



Prospectively, I conceive myself as a competent well-educated mechanical engineer in a renowned company with international interests, besides preparing to do my Master's Degree in Mechanical Engineering or Autotronics Engineering, and I think to feed my Country with experiences which I learned in Germany, because my Country need like this experiences to be better when comparing it with others Country in the World.


I hope that my great enthusiasm for this discipline, will meet your expectations of a suitable candidate and I should be pleased to provide you with any other details you may require.



Kind regards

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Dear Sir or Madam,

With this letter, I would like to express my keen interest in applying for the Bachelor's Degree Program in Mechanical Engineering at the Technische Universität Clausthal, after finishing the language course from (level B1 – C1) at the University Clausthal language Center.

My Name is Mohammad ALShawabkeh, I got received my General Certificate of Secondary Education in 2013 at a rate with an average of 82.4. I took German courses, and even after that now, I still study a bit in German in my free time. Although I'm in B1 my level in German is B1, I can understand communication general conversations between people whenever I run into German speakers in my city.

I found the best solution for my case is to transfer my studies to have decided to apply to study in Germany , I found Germany since your country and its universities offer me the a high quality of study and expert teaching staff, providing opportunities for me to learn the skills I need to succeed in my field. catch up with the age of speed, Degrees and degrees awarded by German universities.

I grew up as a boy who is eager for to understand ing, how a mechanism, for example, a vehicle, internally operates in a synchronous way to execute a particular function. Also, I am consistently thrilled always fascinated by the challenge of disassembling a device, then reassembling it again. choosing this distinct field of study was a decision based on passion and picking out the profession I would enjoy doing the most.

In July 2018, I trained for six weeks in a car maintenance and sales company in Amman - Tawfiq Gargour & Sons is the sole and exclusive agent for Mercedes-Benz cars in Jordan, which has a close and fruitful partnership with Daimler; Mercedes-Benz manufacturer. for a month and a half. I moved to worked across the different sections of the company, and I worked with from the technicians I learned many new things about the work system and processes. how to do it.

I chose to apply to study at the Technische Universität Clausthal because it is one of the strongest German universities in the field of engineering. In Clausthal, there are suitable conditions for concentration, You where one can find quiet places to study and where the professors can be reached easily. Also, the low tuition fees at Clausthal University helped me make this decision. is one of the German universities characterized by low tuition fees.

Prospectively, I conceive In future, I see myself as a competent, well-educated mechanical engineer in a renowned company with international interests, besides preparing to do my master's degree in mechanical engineering or autotronics engineering. and I think to feed I also hope to be able to contribute to my country with the experiences which I will have learned in Germany, because my country needs like this experiences such expertise to develop a sustainable economy. be better when comparing it with others Country in the World.

I hope that my great enthusiasm for this discipline will meet your expectations of a suitable candidate, and I should be pleased to provide you with any other details you may require.

Yours faithfully,

Mohammad Al-Shawabkeh

Kind regards