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Dear Friends

I have gotten my offer from a university and now i should write a motivation letter for the embassy would you please read it and give me your ideas abot it ?

Date: April, 2011

To Whom It May Concern

Dear Sir/Madam,

German universities are internationally renowned and have been the largest university systems in Europe. The importance of a history of learning, academic excellence and the oldest universities cannot be over overestimated.

But facts must be faced, unpalatable as they are, and Higher Education Institutions in Germany combine traditions and modern technologies to allow students to develop their knowledge in a variety of ways.

No one can claim that German universities are not leaders in research and teaching. As everybody knows programs at universities in Germany are structured in a way that directly links theory with practice.

If international students do not choose Germany for continuing higher education , they have only themselves to blame!!! It has never been truer than it is today that German universities are famous for their first-class service for international students. Services are in place to help students feel immediately at home, comfortable and familiar with the German way of life.

Except above cases there are a variety of reasons which I would like to point out about my choice-the first of these being uniqueness (that's very important to me). Combining two major fields of study- Linguistics & Web Technology- will make a specialized MA program. This dual major attraction persuades me to make it my sole choice for studying in theory and practice, simultaneously. Through an internet search, it is so obvious that Philips Marburg University is the first and only university that offers this great major, out of a slew of universities; so, choosing it as my favorite seems greatly logical. Also its great solid faculty and perfect facilities are a fitting place to perform studies. The Iranian educational system is deficient in this way. My aspirations are intertwined in enrollment at your university.

Marburg is not a city with a university located in, it is itself a university which greets everybody from each sign, race, nationality and …. Moreover, I love its friendliness, intimacy and social richness!!!

Young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. So, I as one of those motioned young people decided to continue my higher education in Philips Marburg University that is located in Marburg-Germany and I am sure that my determination would be commendable.

Sincerely yours,

Negin Marandi

Negin Marandi
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Hi Negin;
Which embassy do you have to write to? What is the reason for this letter? What are they concerned about, why do they require a letter from you?
Dear Friend

I hope every thing goes well with you.

I need it for the German Embassy in Iran.

I should inform them why I chose this major and why I would like to continue my education in Germany!!!

Would you please do me a favor and correct it for me !!! my booked appointment time is in 30/03/2011 .So , I do not have enough time !!!

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

B regards,

Negin
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Hi Negin;

Here is what I understand about your situation. You have been accepted at Philips Marburg University for continuing your education, and the German Embassy in Iran needs a letter explaining why you need a student visa. They want to know why you chose Germany, and why you chose this particular school, and also if you will be successful as a member of a new community and as a student. They might be interested in your knowledge of German, etc.

You should be very honest, succinct and straightforward. That is much better than giving general platitudes.

I have marked a lot of cuts from your letter. These are just general remarks. You need to make it more specific to your own situation. If you respect the reader's time, they will respect you.
nake94nake94I should inform them why I chose this major and why I would like to continue my education in Germany!
OK, but you did not say why you chose to study Linguistics & Web Technology.

Date: April, 2011
To Whom It May Concern
Dear Sir/Madam,

I have been very fortunate to have been accepted at Philips Marburg University to continue my studies in Linguistics & Web Technology.
I am writing to give the reasons why I chose this university, and this degree program, and to request approval for a student visa for (dates).

I greatly admire the German university system. German universities are internationally renowned and have been the are the largest university systems in Europe. The importance of a history of learning, academic excellence and the oldest universities cannot be over overestimated.
But facts must be faced, unpalatable as they are, and Higher Education Institutions in Germany They combine traditions and modern technologies to allow students to develop their knowledge in a variety of ways.
No one can claim that German universities are not leaders in research and teaching, so their programs As everybody knows programs at universities in Germany are structured in a way that directly links theory with practice.
If international students do not choose Germany for continuing higher education , they have only themselves to blame!!! It has never been truer than it is today that German universities are famous for their first-class service for international students. Services are in place to help students feel immediately at home, comfortable and familiar with the German way of life.
Except above cases there are a variety of reasons which I would like to point out about my choice-the first of these being uniqueness (that's very important to me).
The reason that I selected Philips Marburg University is that it, of all German institutions, offers a specialized MA programme that is appealing to me. Combining two major fields of study- Linguistics & Web Technology- will make a specialized MA program. This dual major attraction persuades me to make it my sole choice for studying in theory and practice, simultaneously. Through an internet search, it is so obvious that Philips Marburg University is the first and only university that offers this great major, out of a slew of universities; so, choosing it as my favorite seems greatly logical. Also its great solid faculty and perfect facilities are a fitting place to perform studies. The Iranian educational system is deficient in this way. My aspirations are intertwined in enrollment at your university.
The location, Marburg, is very attractive to me, also. It is not a city with a university located in, it is itself a university which greets everybody regardless of their from each sign, race, nationality, or religion. and …. Moreover, I love its friendliness, intimacy and social richness!!!

( Now you need to explain why you have chosen this course of study.)
Young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. So, I as one of those motioned young people decided to continue my higher education in Philips Marburg University that is located in Marburg-Germany and I am sure that my determination would be commendable.
Sincerely yours,
Negin Marandi
Hi,

To Whom It May Concern <<< You don't need this.
Dear Sir/Madam,

Clive
Thank you for your help
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Dear my wonderfull Friend

I really appreciate you for your kind attention , you read my text and corrected it carefully , I really do not know how should I thank you !!! I can just say that you helped me alot and I will never forget it !!!

Hope to compensate one day in the future ***

Best regards,

Negin