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Dear Sir / Madam,
I would like to apply for ...

My motivation for applying this programme is because of the unmatched value X places upon it’s people and the excellent self development opportunities X provides. I was immediately convinced, when I read the X careers web page that starting a career at X is the chance of a lifetime to fulfill my objective of developing myself as a prospective business leader.

I have studied Economics at X University in X. The university itself is the best internationally renowned university in X Only those students in the top five hundred where there are one million and a half applicants taking the university entrance exams are admitted to the university. Admission to such a university where students are highly competent equipped me with a constant awareness to be disciplined and an enthusiasm for change in order to ( necessary?) be ahead of others.

In terms of interpersonal communication, I am responsive to my colleagues and am eager to help whenever possible. I am good at team work, able to consider and analyse different opinions, and take the lead when necessary. I am good at persuading others by creating relationships based on mutual trust and understanding.

I had an internship with Banca X. There I had the chance to serve as a marketing analyst for one and a half month during my 3 months internship period which was decisive in choosing my career path. Besides work experience I participated in a great range of social activities and held roles as supervisor, executive board member and president. During those activities I sometimes lead teams and sometimes was part of a team. Taking part in extra-curricular activities provided me with invaluable organizational, public communication and leadership skills.

I know X seeks only the brightest and most creative applicants for the graduate development programme. I also know that I have the ability it takes to perform the job effectively, and that I am excited about the idea of working for a dynamic, internationally recognised IT company,

You can find my qualifications and skills in the enclosed resume. If you would like to have more information about my qualifications and skills, please contact me by e-mail or phone.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
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Dear Sir / Madam,

I would like to apply for...

My motivation for applying to this program is due to the unmatched value X places upon its people and the excellent self development opportunities X provides. I was immediately convinced when I read the careers web page, I saw a chance to develop my skills as a prospective business leader.

I have studied Economics at X University in X. The university itself is internationally renowned. Only those students in the top five hundred (of a million and a half applicants) are admitted to the university. Admission afforded me a constant awareness of discipline and enthusiasm for change.

In terms of interpersonal communication, I am responsive to my colleagues and am eager to help whenever possible. I am happy in teams, able to consider and analyze different opinions, and take the lead when necessary. I am prefer to develop relationships based on mutual trust and understanding.

I also completed an internship with Banca X. There I had the chance to serve as a marketing analyst for one and a half months during my 3 months internship period; which was decisive in choosing my career path.

Besides work experience I participated in a great range of social activities and held roles as a supervisor, executive board member and a president. During that period I lead teams and was also part of teams. Taking part in extra-curricular activities provided me with invaluable organizational, public communication and leadership skills.

I know X seeks only the brightest and most creative applicants for the graduate development program. I also know that I have the ability it takes to perform the job effectively, I am excited about the idea of working for a dynamic, internationally recognized company.

You can find my qualifications and skills in the enclosed resume. If you would like more information please contact me by e-mail or phone.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

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the letter is good...but try and cut down on a few things. Keep it short
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