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Hi!
Could somebody help me with my motivation letter (gramatics, spelling and content)? I want to apply for a Crepuq scholarship in order to study the next year in Montreal in a english university.
I appreciate a lot any help. Thanks you.

This is the present version of the letter:

Dear Sir or Madam,

With this letter, I would like to submit my application for the Crepuq Scholarship Program for studying in an University from Quebec during the academic year 2007-2008.


I would like to continue my education at an institution of higher education from Canada, in order to learn more about the structure and organization of a company, economical processes in general, global economic coherences and communications, new cultures thought a North-American perspective, but also to improve my English economic vocabulary.

I have always endeavoured to do my best and learn as much as possible. I have started my universitary classes in Romania where I have successfully obtained high marks in most of the courses with an overall of 9.40 over 10 in the first two years. In addition to this, I won the First prize on the Economic Student’s Research Session in April 2005, section: Financial Management of the Firm.

I have continued my education in the University of Social Sciences in Toulouse, where I have obtained a BA Degree in Economics, specialisation in International Economics, Money and Finance (with honours).Even if I have already began my master degree in France, I think that the chance of studying in your University is a unique opportunity to increase my knowledge and to live a very enriching experience.

In addition to my academic activities, I have also had the chance to take part in many social volunteer activities which gave me experience in working with young people from all over the world.

Thereafter I want to use the acquired knowledge to continue in a masters program of finance, aiming to be well prepared to enter the business world. My long-term goal is to work for an international company in the financial field, bringing in new ideas and an efficient working style gained through my higher education gained in Romania, in France and hopefully in Canada.

I am confident that with my strong motivation, my personality and with an academic experience in an international and multicultural environment, I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural communication takes place effectively.

I have attached all required documents for the Crepuq program. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details.

Yours respectfully,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

With this letter, I would like to submit my application for the Crepuq Scholarship Program to study at a University in Quebec during the academic year 2007-2008.

I would like to continue my education at an institution of higher education in Canada, in order to learn more about the structure and organization of a company, economical processes in general, global economic coherences and communications, new cultures through a North-American perspective, but also to improve my English economic vocabulary.

I have always endeavoured to do my best and learn as much as possible. I started my degree in Romania where I successfully obtained high marks in most of the courses with an overall of 9.40 over 10 in the first two years. In addition to this, I won the First prize on the Economic Student’s Research Session in April 2005, section: Financial Management of the Firm.

I continued my education at the University of Social Sciences in Toulouse, where I obtained a BA Degree in Economics, specialisation in International Economics, Money and Finance (with honours). Although I have already begun my Masters degree in France, I think that the chance of studying in your University is a unique opportunity to increase my knowledge and to live a very enriching experience.

In addition to my academic activities, I have also had the chance to take part in many social volunteer activities which gave me experience in working with young people from all over the world.

Thereafter I want to use the acquired knowledge to continue in a masters program of finance, aiming to be well prepared to enter the business world. My long-term goal is to work for an international company in the financial field, bringing in new ideas and an efficient working style gained through my higher education gained in Romania, in France and hopefully in Canada.

I am confident that with my strong motivation, my personality and with an academic experience in an international and multicultural environment, I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural communication takes place effectively.

I have attached all required documents for the Crepuq program. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details.

Yours respectfully,

A
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Hi. I am actually new here but i would like to give this a try. Good Luck!

Dear Sir or Madam,

Greetings!


I would like apply for the Crepuq Scholarship Program for studying in a University from Quebec during the academic year 2007-2008.

I would like to continue my education in a Canadian institute that offers higher education, in order to learn more about businesses' structure and organization, economic processes in general, global economic coherences and communications, new cultures thought in a North-American perspective, and also to learn English used in economics.

I have always strived to do my best and learn as much as I can. I have started universitary classes in Romania, where I have successfully obtained high marks in most of the courses that I took -- with an average of 9.40 over 10 in my first two years. In addition, I won the first prize on the Economic Student’s Research Session in April 2005, section: Financial Management of the Firm.

I continued my education in the University of Social Sciences in Toulouse where I have obtained a BA Degree in Economics, specializing in International Economics, Money and Finance and garnered honors with it. Even if I have already began my master degree in France, I believe that your University is is the best place to develop my knowledge and that your have the capabilities to improve and mold me the best way possible.

In addition to my academic activities, I have also give time to my community. I take part in many social volunteer activities which give me opportunites of working with young people from all over the world.

All these in mind, I want to use all the acquired knowledge to pursue a masters degree in finance, aiming to be well-prepared to enter the business world. My long-term goal is to work in the financial aspect of an international company, bringing in new ideas, and create efficient working styles gained through my education gained in Romania, France and hopefully Canada.

I am confident that with my strong motivation, my personality and with an academic background in an international and multicultural environment, I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career, in which I plan to weld relationships across cultures and ensure that intercultural communication takes place effectively.

I have attached all required documents for the Crepuq program. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details.

Yours respectfully,