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Hi

I wrote a motivation letter for ESC project and I need to revise my motivation letter.

Heba Mohamed

Egypt, Cairo

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To: L'Enfance de l'Art


Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in applying for the Steiner/Loczy nursery-volunteering with babies and toddlers. I have always dreamed about becoming an activist for child rights with UNICEF, and I believe that project would set me miles ahead to reaching my goal.


After graduation, I was working at a nursery with children aged (0-3) that helped me when I treated older children.

Children of this age need someone to help them with every detail. Thus, should be gently, empathic and organized, so I helped them with meals, activities and free play.

I studied Montessori's & Bandura’s pedagogies, so it is incredible to get training in Loczy & Steiner pedagogies. I am learning French, and want to practice my language.


I believe I would be a good fit for the program because I have a wonderful experience with children .


Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,

Heba Mohamed

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Ok thanks I remove tis part of my comptation, and I can explain more about the program.

What about the second part of my eassy ?

banana zany 438Ok thanks I remove tis part of my comptation, and I can explain more about the program.

Again, I don't understand what you mean. You need to address that part of the question (professional reasons). You cannot evade it! Just write a paragraph on how that program will help you achieve your professional goals.

banana zany 438What about the second part of my eassy ?

Let's sort out the first part; we can deal with the rest later.

Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?

Ok I rewrite this part again.

Thanks

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1- Briefly introduce yourself (studies, past relevant experiences, passions) ?

My name is Heba Mohamed and I graduated from Cairo University with a Bachelor of Education (kindergarten) in 2012. Also, I completed a Higher Diploma in Child Education in 2014.I have been a kindergarten teacher for ten years, dealing with children aged 2-6 years. I have a genuine passion for working with children, so I have always dreamed about becoming an activist for child rights with UNICEF, and I believe that this project would help me attain this goal.

2-Why do you want to participate in this ESC (personal, professional reasons, …) ?
I would like to express my interest in applying for this ESC project for several reasons.
Personal : I really want to live this incredible experience in the forests because it is not available in my country.I consider it a vibrant experience to get the opportunity to meet volunteers from all over the world and learn about their culture and values.

Professional :As a teacher will gain a new knowing & skills to learn children among nature not as usual in the classrooms, besides there will be a training for volunteers
In addition, I desire to convey this amazing experience to my country beside I will apply it in my nursery.
I am confident that practical experience brings me a step closer to get my Master degree in Education for sustainability.

OK/okay, Ive rewritten this part again. [ 1]

Thanks.

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1- Briefly introduce yourself (studies, past relevant experiences, passions) ?

My name is Heba Mohamed. and I graduated from Cairo University with a Bachelor of Education (kindergarten) in 2012. Also, I completed a Higher Diploma in Child Education in 2014. I have been a kindergarten teacher for ten years, dealing with children aged 2-6 years. I have a genuine passion for working with children, so I have always dreamed about becoming an activist for child rights with UNICEF, and I believe that this project would help me attain this goal.

2-Why do you want to participate in this ESC (personal, professional reasons, …) ?

I would like to express my interest in applying apply for this ESC project for several reasons.

Personal: I really want to live this incredible experience in the forests because it is not available in my country. I consider it a vibrant experience to get the opportunity to meet volunteers from all over the world and learn about their cultures and values.

Professional: As a teacher, I will gain a new knowing & knowledge and skills to learn from teaching children among nature not as in the natural environment, as against in the usual in the traditional classroom. Besides, there will be valuable training for volunteers which

In addition, I desire to convey this amazing experience to my country beside I will and to apply it personally in my future nursery.

I am confident that practical experience will bring me a step closer to getting my master’s degree in education for sustainability.

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[ 1]: But I see that you still insist on repeating your old text without paying attention to the changes I’m making!

Sorry but I remove the part you told that not important. But I take a copy in my last essay in the end I write it by all changes you make it sure

This first part is done now right

Thanks for your attention

Students: We have free audio pronunciation exercises.

3-What could your contributions to this ESC be (activities you would like to promote or get involved in). What causes would you passionately pursue as a volunteer at Descalças?

Surely, I can will plan and organize indoor and outdoor activities like stories, songs, painting & drawing. As well, I help them I will also help the children with sports, give and teach them healthy habits and gardening. Also, I can assist them with meals, free play and teach them languages. It is a lovely job. I am so excited about aim to use the opportunity the idea of intercultural days to introduce children every day to a new culture, and I will be happy if I introduce an including the Arabic culture. And, I have another idea that we can throw an Moreover, I will organize event, parties or camping in nature for children, some puppet shows, crafts and music events every week.

When I studied Pestalozzi's pedagogy in my college, I believed that there is no better place for a child than nature and that idea is still with me, so, I want every child to be educated in nature and I hope to be a part of this experience to help them.

4-What causes have you started, volunteered for, and/or contributed to? i.e., How have you turned your passions into actions to improve the world we live in?

There was and still my passion is helping and learning children everywhere, so I volunteered to learn teach refugee children at Resale Foundation in 2018, and I tried to help them to continue their education despite the interruptions and difficult conditions they faced. Also, I also participated as a facilitator to teach marginalized children and teenagers important life skills in Hey Masar Organization in 2021, an education and personal-development program (personality building, good health and harassment) in a community school. and trained them some professional skills to help them in their lives.

5-What challenges do you think you may come across in this project? (cultural differences, language, working in a team, etc..... ?

Definitely, Cultural diversity is a big can be a challenge for some, everyone, but luckily, I grew up in an intercultural country (Egypt), which makes me accept and embrace difference. other people. In my job, I teach children from different communities, colors, ethnicities, religions and cultures, and I usually try to merge together and always aim to teach them how to respect diversity. their variety. I am keen on building strong relationships and friendships with other cultures, and I hope to be a good ambassador for my country.

About language, Furthermore, I am a fast learner of languages and I speak Arabic and English. and I am currently learning Spanish, and I hope to learn more new languages.

Working together as a team spreads positive energy everywhere, and I could look forward to working and cooperating with colleagues on this program. the wonderful teammates, and we were honored by my children’s parents last year as having the best stage & teamwork in my school.

Last year, my class was voted Best Class for Teamwork by the children’s parents.

6-What experience do you have traveling, living and/or working overseas, or other cultural immersion? i.e., What makes you confident you would thrive in Marvão - Portugal?

Although I have not traveled outside my country before, fortunately I joined a development organization that had a partnership with AIESEC Egypt, so I was a part of actively participated in a variety of groups with people from other cultures and we became friends. I think the totally experience from your program will make me a new person, especially working with volunteers from different cultures. I dream from now of being a part of this amazing experience. I hope to be given a chance, as I am confident that I am capable of meeting and even exceeding your expectations.

Than you so much for your revision.

But I want to ask why I have to remove the part of pistalozzi pedagogy I want to be as a story in my essay that explain my interesting about the idea of the program and I have the same thoughts and I want to write my participation in international eassy competition about the essay I wrote it by the same idead of learning in nature but I titled green school

Or that not important for the application ?


Thanks again

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OK, say something like the following:

banana zany 438

When I studied I would passionately pursue what I learnt from studying Pestalozzi's pedagogy in my college, I believed especially that there is no better place for a child to learn than nature. and that idea is still with me, so, Thus, I want every child to be educated in nature and I hope to be a part of this experience to help them.

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Ok, thank you so much

And what about this part it's important to added it in my eassy or not .

I think we have the same thoughts and I wrote it in my essay Green Schools when

I participated in an International Essay Competition in 2018. Moreover, I got an honor certificate. It is my pleasure to read my article soon

The article said that schools should have a sustainable environment, starting with healthy food and children participating in gardening and recycling everything.


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