Hello everyone,

Can someone help me to check my motivation letter on grammar and sentences.
My writing skills is not so good. It is a motivation letter for an internship in the UK.
I am very pleases if someone could help me.

Dear [name]

My name is [name] from [place] I study international business and languages at the [name]University, and I expect to graduate in June 2016. I am writing in response to your internship in Marketing Assistant as advertised on the website www.indeed.co.uk of 5October. I enclose my résumé for further information.

The reason I am applying for this position because I have a strong interest in assisting in marketing, and I am looking for a position which is more closely related to these areas, especially at a firm like [name] where the quality is very important as well as the satisfaction of customers. I hope that I can share this with my skills.

My training and experience will show that I can perform the duties of the manager assistant. During my course I learned a lot about Marketing and Sales. We worked on projects like doing a market research for a company. Through my work experience in sales, I made many contacts with customers and have improved my commutations skills.

If you would like to have more information about my qualifications and skill, do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely

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