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May I get some help please assessing my motivation letter, It's my first time writing one and I have no clue how mine will be evaluated, heartfelt thanks in advance.



Dear Sir/Madam,

With this letter, I would like to express my interest and apply for a Master of Science degree in Molecular Medicine at Friedrich Alexander University.

While studying Biochemistry and Histology in my first year at college I was wondering about the value of learning such a subject, I thought it might be a basic understanding of how cells work in our body but through my college years I came to a clearer thought that Medicine is not about rough diagnosis and prescribing treatment to patients as we see doctors do in hospitals or clinics. In fact, Medicine is a broad Science with a wide range of different subspecialties other than the clinical ones.

Molecular Medicine has everything that I need to know, as I believe one needs to be multidisciplinary to understand Medicine, since they can not focus on the tiny little thing. It has biology, immunology, genetics, biotechnology, etc.. which makes one have a wider view and a better understanding of science.

I learned that today’s complex health care problems require a multidisciplinary approach; for example instead of treating the symptoms that appears on the body, this can be studied more specifically from the perspective of the body cells, which helps giving a clearer image of how the a disease happen, thus how it can be cured in a more definite way and that is how I want my future self to be.


However, the studies and research in these fields in my country are still to come in the future. I have a very strong desire to pursue a career in Molecular Biology and I decided to continue my studies in this area and receive MSc and further PhD degrees.


I am fully confident that I have sufficient qualification and experience as well as language proficiency, both in German and English, to successfully graduate with the Master’s degree in Molecular Medicine. I strongly believe that the Master course at your university will give me the opportunity to gain highly sought after skills and extend my knowledge that will equip me for career destinations across a diversity of molecular medicine subject areas in both industry and academia.


Faithfuly,

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Hi Lisa,

1- How many words were you asked to write?

2- What areas do you need to cover in your letter?

3- What is the submission deadline?

hello teechr,

nothing were mentioned, I just found a file needed to be uploaded under the name of (letter of application) while I'm filling my application, I will add a screenshot for this to the post above

deadline 30/5/2022

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Dear Sir/Madam,

With this letter, I would like to express my interest and apply for the Master of Science degree in Molecular Medicine at Friedrich Alexander University.

While studying Biochemistry and Histology in my first year at college, I was wondering thought much about the value of learning such subjects, I thought and came to the conclusion that they it might be provide a basic understanding of how cells work in our body, but through my college years, I came to a clearer thought understanding that medicine is not about rough diagnosis and prescribing treatment to patients as we see doctors do in hospitals or clinics. In fact, medicine is a broad science with a wide range of different sub-specialties, other than the clinical ones.

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That is enough for that section. You should try to write paragraphs about:

1- Your achievements (particularly anything related to the program in question), talents, skills, etc.

2- Your future aspirations.

3- How this program will help your career.

Revise and post below. Otherwise, if you want me to proofread the letter as it is, let me know.

I hope its not rude if I asked you to help proofread the rest of the letter, I would be grateful

Do you mean that you want me to proofread it as it is (without you changing it)?

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