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hi Jasmina

can you check out my motivation letter and correct it for me

Dear Sir,
First I would like to express my appreciation for the opportunity to apply for this scholarship. I hold a degree in Hotel management from the Higher Institute for Tourism and Hotels - King Mariot- Alexandria. I was Fighting through my studies and hard, I love my field of study, therefore, decided to delve in this area and joined the master's study at the University of Alexandria, when the opportunity came to complement this study in a European country, I was very happy because the study abroad this represents the next important challenge in my life. Studying and living abroad can help not only broaden my horizons but accelerate my personal and academic growth as well. The opportunity of meeting and associating with people from all over the world and to be immersed in a society with a global outlook and politically neutral understanding of life, My objective is to pursue the M.sc in hospitality management with emphasis in hotels, management, marketing, plus living and integrating with multilingual people in order to develop a my language which is undoubtedly one of my reasons to study in a European country. I believe that my strong motivation to pursue an International carrier in the field of Hotels and hospitality management and Marketing makes me a strong candidate for scholarship. I am looking forward to the opportunity to study in a European country and immerse myself in my studies; I strongly believe that I am well prepared for studying hospitality management in depth. After my work experience in my own restaurant, I had an excellent pathway to business and I always enjoyed learning about management as I found it fascinating. In addition to my professional experience, I have also had training at"American hotel, lodging association" to how to be trainer in hospitality department and another certification in F&B skills which gave me experiences in working selflessly for others. The study Masters in European country is certain level of knowledge in hospitality management which will provide me the ability and confidence necessary to work.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.

Sincerely
Mohamed Farouk
Hey everyone,

I become totally desperate by writing a motivation letter for an english University.

You would be a very big help if you could give me some good advises. I really have no idea what and how to write...

Here is my version (please be kind, I never did someting like this before Emotion: smile ) :

Dear Sir or Madam

My name is ***** ****, I am 22 years old and I have been studying International Management, at the University of Applied Sciences in *** for three semesters. I would like to apply for a course in the fifth semester at the **** University. Due to my experience, interests and education, I have a clear idea of what I would like to do in the future. I intend to work in a responsible position in a medium or large sized international company. In times of globalization it is very important to learn something about foreign countries, cultures and the people who live there.

That is one of the reasons why I decided to broaden my horizon and go for an exchange semester.

Another one is that I have learned a lot about personnel management and international marketing during my studies and I would like to gain more detailed knowledge in this field. To prepare myself for this subject I have done an internship at an environmental protection agency, where I was assigned as an assistant on a market research project. I tremendously enjoyed my experience working at the environmental agency because I had on the one hand the opportunity to work by myself as I was responsible for the collection of data and the customer contacts. On the other hand I also acquired the ability to assert myself within a team and also to enjoy the work as a group. These opportunities strengthened my skills in working independently and in a team. I find this work challenging, interesting, and invigorating and I am determined to become better skilled so that I can lead a group in the future.

Not only because the courses which are offered at the ** University fit perfectly to the courses I attend at University of Applied Sciences in **, but rather the fact that ** is a beautiful and world-famous student city which has a rich cultural and academic history, fascinates me since my last visit to England and confirm me and my desire to study at this University.

In times of internationalisation, it is necessary to fully be aware of international business, wherefore it is important for me to improve my skills in languages, especially in the global language English. Not only for this reason I decided to study a course in which the lectures are held in English, but rather for the reason that I enjoy learning various languages.

The ** University is the best opportunity for me and my future career and therefore I am sure that one semester abroad at your University would help me to improve my skills within the business studies. I really hope that you give me the chance to be part of the ** family.

Yours faithfully,
Jasmina, it is a little bit boring.. you can begin with the question or something else which can arise interest to your motivation..of course this is my idea Emotion: smile
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