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Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing to you to apply for the International Business programme in MAMK.
To begin with, I'd like to present some background information about myself. I'm from Pushkin which is near Saint-Petersburg. At the moment I'm studying in high school. I've been traveling much and I'm intrested in North countries, especially in Finland.

Finland has a very stable economy and personally I think that it's worth to study Its' example. Moreover, I appreciate habitant's attitude to ecology in Finland and I want Russian people treat ecology as well as in Fnalnd.

When I started to think about my future career path I decided to visit some Finnish universities and I chose MAMK.

It is believed that there is one of the best education system in Finland. I've chose MAMK because studying there will help me learn about IB and study languages and culture. And I hope that it'll give me opportunites to find a job, where I make a contribution in cooperation between Russia and Finland.

Thank you for considering my application.

Yours sincerely,
Valerya
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Finland has a very stable economy and personally I think that it's worth to study Its' example. Moreover, I appreciate habitant's attitude to ecology in Finland and I want Russian people treat ecology as well as in Fnalnd.When I started to think about my future career path I decided to visit some Finnish universities and I chose MAMK.It is believed that there is one of the best education system in Finland. I've chose MAMK because studying there will help me learn about IB and study languages and culture. And I hope that it'll give me opportunites to find a job, where I make a contribution in cooperation between Russia and Finland.Thank you for considering my application.Yours sincerely,Valerya[/quote]
Dear Sir/Madam
I would like to apply for the International Business Programme in MAMK.
I would like to present some details about me: I am from Pushkin, which is near Saint Paersburg. Presently I am studying in the high school.
I travel quite a lot. I am interested in North countries, especially Finland. Finland has a very economy and it is my personal opinion that is is worth studying it as a good example. Further I like the people especially in terms of their attitude to ecology. I wish Russians must emulate the people of Finland in this regard.
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When I started to think about my career I decided to visit some Finnish universities and eventually I chose MAMK. I have come to know through many sources that MAMK follows one of the best systems of Education. Furthermore my studying at MAMK will enable me learn about IB and study languages and the culture of Finland.
I hope that my study here will give me quite a number of job opportunities and also help me contribute to the strengthening of cooperation between Russia and Finland.

I would like to thank you for considering my application.

Yours sincerely