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I‘ve studied for industrial engineer electronics the last 4 years in Ostend. In this previous education, I’ve learned about the most important electronic principles that are used in nowadays technology. In some courses about quality, safety, economy, yet I’ve seen a little bit how to manage a company. I found it very interesting and I want to learn more about how to manage an industrial company.

I also realise more and more that there is big gap between theory and practice. There’s a long way between the research and the sale of a product. Reading the information at the website about the education, master in industrial management, it seems the perfect way to reduce this gap between theory and practice. I hope I could participate in the lessons product and production management.

I hope this course is a useful addition to my current education that I can use for my later professional career. This course will definitely increase my opportunities to get a good job.

With kind regards,
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Guest,

Your letter needs a lot of work, mostly on the content side. Your letter seems weak because it seems that you are just looking for a job. I don't see any motivation or passion in your letter.

I have given it some thoughts and created a new letter, though I am not happy with it. If it were my letter, I would use it as a start. I would let it sit for a couple days, revise it, let it sit, revise and repeat the cycle until I was satisfied. But it might at least provide some ideas for you.

Don't use my letter as it is now. Rather, see if you can develop some ideas of your own from it. If you use my letter, then it is me thinking and writing, not you. You need to have your letter represent YOU.

I hope this helps.

Good luck,
MountainHiker

I‘ve studied for industrial engineer electronics the last 4 years in Ostend. In this previous education, I’ve learned about the most important electronic principles that are used in nowadays technology. In some courses about quality, safety, economy, yet I’ve seen a little bit how to manage a company. I found it very interesting and I want to learn more about how to manage an industrial company.

I also realise more and more that there is big gap between theory and practice. Reading the information at the website about the education, master in industrial management, it seems the perfect way to reduce this gap between theory and practice. I hope I could participate in the lessons product and production management.

I hope this course is a useful addition to my current education that I can use for my later professional career. This course will definitely increase my opportunities to get a good job.


During the past four years, I studied industrial engineering (with specialization in?) electronics at Ostend. The emphasis of my studies was understanding the fundamental electronic principles that govern modern day electronics. But I also learned about other diverse topics such as safety, economics, and industrial management. I found the last topic, industrial management, to be very interesting and exciting, because one of my career aspirations is to participate in the senior management of an industrial company.

To further my career aspiriations of becoming part of a senior management team, I want to obtain a Master's Degree in Industrial Management. Having this knowledge will allow me to better understand management principles. With all the uncertainty and changes in with world, political, economic, and technological, I believe that management must have a solid understanding, supported by a strong academic foundation, of how to guide companies through these challenging times.

No education is complete without experience. Armed with a solid understanding of academic principles, I can begin my career where I will add to my experience. Because I will be well versed in the theory, I will be able to adapt and modify the theoretical constructs as required in order to meet my company's needs. I fully recognize that our political, economic, and technological environments are constantly changing, and thus management needs to be able to adapt quickly and accurately to the new conditions if the company is to survive, let alone prosper. I believe obtaining a Master's Degree will provide the necessary background for me to be to anticipate and react to ever-changing environments.

I look forward to launching my new career. Should you have any questions, please contact me at....

Sincerely,

Notes:

1) The organization is as follows:

1st Para: I like industrial management and my career aspiration is to be a manager.

2nd Para: I believe your knowledge is critical to my objectives.

3rd Para: I also know that education and reality are different. But your program will allow me to accomplish both.

4th Para: If you have questions, call me.

2) If you are able to, discuss WHY you like management.

3) Do not use "job" as a motivating factor. Seek a higher motivation or calling. You are curious, you have a passion for leading people, you enjoy watching people grow and achieve seemingly impossible tasks.

4) Edit this letter so that it becomes your own. Use it as a template for what you want to say.

You need a fresh set of eyes to see if this even reads well. I have spent more than a half hour on this, so my thinking is not as clear as it ought to be.
Dear anon1,

I have read Your post and found several useful truck for myself.I think it was a good start for that guy, but he obviously needs to improve the text.Also i agrre with that not to be ordinary applicant one should not use "job" as motivator.

I would like to apply for one year as a European Volunteer programme by JEF-France Young European France organization and I need a motivation letter.I study at the academy of Public administration(Major: public administration) and I know also French(as my advantage there)

Work description : The volunteer will take part in various projects, as the organisation of seminars, school tours, campaigns,
exchanges, debates etc. The EV will be introduced to all parts of the young European organisation and work within a variety of
projects. This will help the EVS getting a holistic picture of NGO work, structure, methods etc. The EV will also have the possibility to learn how to build up long term project, find finances, do press work, dolobbying, work with the internet, member contacts etc.in a NGO.

We expect particularly the EV to work within our twomajor kinds of actions (information and lobbying) and
specially our programme "Europe at school" and ourcampaign for the European Civilian Service. The EV
will also have the opportunity to deal with ournational events (such as our summer university, our
training seminar, our european seminar ...),communication tools (monthly newsletter, websites,
...), public relations (for instance during fairs,forums or street actions), work with otherassociations involved or not in European issues... The volunteer will also have the opportunity to plan,organise and implement his/her own projects, for
instance in link with his/her own country. The EV will be based in our national office in Paris
but he/she could have the opportunity to participatein specific activities in the rest of France andEurope.

Who we are looking for :

There are no formal requirements of the volunteers,but certain characteristics we believe would greatlycontribute to the type of work the volunteer willundertake. These include : Dynamic, organized, rigorous... Willingness and ability to work as part of a team
and together with other young people, to plan andimplement projects Willingness to take part in street actions,
presentations in school... Ability to communicate with young people, especially
around the areas of Europe and the EuropeaConstitution, even if prior knowledge in these areasis not a prerequisite Interest in European issues (specially Europe as apolitical integration project) and European cultureexchange Interest in NGO work and the participation in civilsociety Ideally member or sympathizer of one of JEF Europe
national organizations , but other applications will
also be welcomed.

So, would You please help me with writing the motivation letter.I mean any hints I should use to show myself the best

Looking forward to hearing from You soon!

Regards,

Rustam
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Hallo,

Can someone check my motivaton letter for Phd studies?

Thanks

Ena

Dear Mr. ***

I would like to apply for vacancy at the *** University, *** Department, project: “***" announced on your site.

I have completed five years of undergraduate studies and two years of master studies at the Department of *** of Faculty ***, University ***, and defended master thesis last year. To date my research has produced several papers, published in domestic and international journals or presented on congresses and meetings. Several papers related to resources sharing strategies in logistic systems and transport issues are in preparation. During my work as teaching and research assistant on the Faculty ***, I participated as co-author in several projects and studies interrelated with logistic systems design and analysis. My research interests are focused on the supply chain management, material and information flows, logistic processes, performances, supply chain design, decision making and operations research in general.

There are a number of different schools and approaches to supply chain issues. The *** Department of *** University best suites me because it offers many courses that are specifically related to areas of my interest – decision making, operations research, logistics and supply chain management. Beside that, I have read many of the *** Department’s published papers related to supply chain management, which I found very helpful in the process of writing my thesis and papers. Conducting PhD studies and research within the *** group would improve and increase my knowledge and practical experience, especially because I have very little research possibilities in my country. It will be my privilege to work, develop PhD thesis and learn from professors with grate experience in theory and practice.

The large overlap of teaching and research areas between the *** Department on *** University and the Department *** of Faculty ***, University *** should make benefits to both. I think that I can bring to *** University appropriate contribution related to specific logistic processes realization at one hand, and for The Faculty *** new scientific approaches and research methodologies in supply chain area, at the other.

Looking forward to hearing from you

Yours sincerely
En
Hey ; my name is muse

Iám interresting realy how you help each other.

secondly, I found also very difficult to writing motivation letters to universty .

therfore i need your help
Thanks, I have gone through Your helping message. thanks again..

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im a student of Computer Scinece & engineering of final year seeking MS admission in Sweden (KTH).They asked for a motivation letter,can any 1 give me a sample or template.

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If you look for a sample just look in the forum. There are several Motivation Letters including my own...
Thank you all, Very helpful information
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