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I am applying for a Remote Sensing/GIS trainee position at International Red Cross Committee (their Water and Habitat Unit). Please can someone kindly review this for me. I'll really appreciate it, as i have to submit today.


Dear Madam,

I came across this opportunity for a Remote sensing/GIS trainee associate at ICRC from an Online Job board.

Having completed my Post Graduate studies in Geographic Information System (GIS), I am confident that my experience aligns well with the qualifications you are seeking, and the knowledge gained and skills acquired would complement the advertised position. These include strategic independent research, initiative, self-motivation, multi-tasking, good presentation skills amongst others. I also bring to the table strong proficiencies in Ms Office Suite, data management software, SPSS, GIS mapping software such as ArcGIS and ArcGIS Online.

As someone who’s deeply interested in humanitarian issues, I’ve seen a broad range of social issues facing contemporary societies, and in particular modern post-conflict societies. This made me become very aware of the importance of the field missions of international organizations, and their constant efforts to preserve the dignity of war victims and prevent conflicts that may endanger the minimum standards of human rights.

This awareness induced in me an eagerness to contribute, even if in a small way, to this huge mission of assuring a minimum standard of respect for human lives in scenarios where rational thought has often disappeared. All this is for the sake of our shared humanity because every life counts

I have always desired to have a professional experience abroad, allowing me to meet different kinds of people and cultures; this I consider will make me a richer and better person. I love new ideas, challenges and learning new technologies. I am excited to add value always! As a fast learner with a large intellectual capacity for growth and development, I am confident that I can add value to your organization via my work ethic.

I would be grateful for an invitation to demonstrate how I can bring these competencies to your organization.

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Dear Madam,

I came across this opportunity for a Remote sensing/GIS trainee associate (Be consistent in capitalization.) at ICRC from an online job board. (You might mention the URL)

Having completed my Post Graduate (One word, no caps) studies in Geographic Information System (GIS), I am confident that my experience aligns well with the qualifications you are seeking, and my the knowledge gained and skills acquired would match complement the advertised position. These include strategic independent research, initiative, self-motivation, multi-tasking, and good presentation skills amongst others. I also bring to the table strong proficiencies in Ms Office Suite, data management software, SPSS, and GIS mapping software such as ArcGIS and ArcGIS Online.

As someone who’s is deeply interested in humanitarian issues, I’ve seen a broad range of social issues facing contemporary societies, and in particular modern post-conflict societies. This made me become very aware of the importance of the field missions of international organizations, and their constant efforts to preserve the dignity of war victims and prevent conflicts that may endanger basic the minimum standards of human rights.

This awareness induced in me (very awkward) an eagerness to contribute, even if in a small way, to this huge challenging mission of assuring a minimum standard of respect for human lives in scenarios where rational thought has often disappeared. All this is for the sake of our shared humanity because every life counts (missing punctuation)

I have always desired to have a professional experience abroad, allowing me to meet different kinds of people and cultures; this I consider will make me a richer and better person. I love new ideas, challenges and learning new technologies. I am excited to add value always! As a fast learner with a large intellectual capacity for growth and development, I am confident that I can add value to your organization via my work ethic.

I would be grateful for an invitation to demonstrate how I can bring these competencies to your organization.

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I am applying for a Remote Sensing/GIS trainee position at International Red Cross Committee (their Water and Habitat Unit). Please can someone kindly review this for me. I'll really appreciate it, as i have to submit today.


Dear Madam,

I came across this opportunity for a Remote sensing/GIS trainee associate at ICRC from an Online Job board.

Having completed my Post Graduate studies in Geographic Information System (GIS), I am confident that my experience aligns well with the qualifications you are seeking, and the knowledge gained and skills acquired would complement the advertised position. These include strategic independent research, initiative, self-motivation, multi-tasking, good presentation skills amongst others. I also bring to the table strong proficiencies in Ms Office Suite, data management software, SPSS, GIS mapping software such as ArcGIS and ArcGIS Online.

As someone who’s deeply interested in humanitarian issues, I’ve seen a broad range of social issues facing contemporary societies, and in particular modern post-conflict societies. This made me become very aware of the importance of the field missions of international organizations, and their constant efforts to preserve the dignity of war victims and prevent conflicts that may endanger the minimum standards of human rights.

This awareness induced in me an eagerness to contribute, even if in a small way, to this huge mission of assuring a minimum standard of respect for human lives in scenarios where rational thought has often disappeared. All this is for the sake of our shared humanity because every life counts

I have always desired to have a professional experience abroad, allowing me to meet different kinds of people and cultures; this I consider will make me a richer and better person. I love new ideas, challenges and learning new technologies. I am excited to add value always! As a fast learner with a large intellectual capacity for growth and development, I am confident that I can add value to your organization via my work ethic.

I would be grateful for an invitation to demonstrate how I can bring these competencies to your organization.

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