The intruder moves slowly down the glass corridor, then freezes, seeing...
A deer standing just on the other side of the glass, staring at him.
The intruder remains motionless. Waits...
After a while, the deer moves off.
The intruder watches it disappear back into the woods...
Then continues down the corridor. Approaches the door at the end...
Hi, teachers. Is 'moves off' what you would use here? And does it fit with the following sentence? Thanks.
Comments
It's fine.
Yes.