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The first poster of an ancient lamp in front of the Obrio collection’s art book advertisement by Ferheed Syed was of a high quality, especially in its depiction of interior and exterior light, as well as the lively design of its scale and balance.

The lamp as it interacted with the light created an interesting value, with its exterior and interior shadow. The contrast in the picture between the bright light of the lamp and the dark shadow that surrounded it made an object stand out.

This design caught my attention, as we might experience it in an ancient time. I noticed of the overall design which was simple but effective. The duplicate font over another on the title of this art poster was interested.

The designer used the scale and color very well, as well as the negative and positive space in this design was outstanding. I felt like this art is a professional rather than a senior student work.
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The second poster is a great piece of work about a world tallest skyscraper by Stephanie Mastrobuono. The design is very simple but interesting where the designer used a combination of letters to create an image of the tallest skyscraper in the world which located in Taipei.

By using the idea of light and visual, this art work used the lighter white color on one side and a grey on the other. This creative idea creates a 3D visual image of the building from fonts. In this skyscraper poster, the designer used an idea of two-point perspective is presented to us within a single format.

Position yourself so that your eye level is like looking to a tallest building from the ground floor. It was a simple art but very creative idea.
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The first poster, by Ferheed Syed, showed an ancient lamp in front of the Obrio collection’s art book advertisement. It was of a high quality, especially in its depiction of interior and exterior light, and in the scale and balance of its lively design.

The lamp as it interacted with the light created an interesting value, with its exterior and interior shadow. The contrast in the picture between the bright light of the lamp and the dark shadow that surrounded it made the object stand out.

This design caught my attention, with its suggestion of ancient times. The overall design was simple but effective. The doubling of one font over another in the title of this art poster was interesting.

The designer used scale and color very well; moreover, the use of negative and positive space in this design was outstanding. This artwork felt like the creation of a professional artist, rather than a senior student.
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The second poster is a fine piece of work by Stephanie Mastrobuono, and depicts the world's tallest skyscraper, which is located in Taipei. The design is very simple but interesting: the designer has used a combination of letters to create the image of the skyscraper.

This artwork plays on our visual expectations; it uses a light white color on one side and grey on the other to create a 3D visual image of the building from different characters. In this skyscraper poster, the designer has used the idea of a two-point perspective presented to us within a single format.

Position yourself as if you were looking at a very tall building from ground level. It was simple art but a very creative idea.

[Let me know if I've inadvertently changed the meaning!]

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That was a very helpful work.
Thanks again and again for your comments.
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Hello! This is Stephanie Mastrobuono. Thank you for your fine critique of my Skyscraper design. From your description, I can almost envision the piece without seeing it, congratulations!
It is always fun to find an unexpected critique on your work Emotion: smile
Sincerely,
Stephanie Mastrobuono
www.coppldesign.com