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Hi

Do the underlined parts work naturally? Any suggestions please?

(-- said by a novelist)

My boredom and reluctance to write started getting reflected in my work.

My boredom and reluctance to write started reflecting in my work.

Thanks,

Tom

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That's actually ambiguous. Do you mean that your writings started reflecting those or that it became impacted by them? I suggest you change the phrasing.