please correct my mistakes in the paragraph below. thanks in advance. I will also prefer rate this article and advice how can I improve my writings, thanks in advance.

Favorite person
My favorite person is my father who always cares me. Without my father’s inspiration I could never handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depress about my upcoming results. He said,” hey, Young man don’t be sad, have belief in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a whole, he is a great inspiration for me.
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My favorite person is my father who always cares for me. Without my father’s inspiration I could would never be able to handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results., He he said,” hey Hey, Young young man, don’t be sad, have belief faith in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a On the whole, he is a great inspiration for me.
' I was very depressed about my upcoming results., He he said,”'
after the word 'results' i couldn't get the punctuation marks. is it comma or semicolon ?
'I would never be able to handle difficult situations.'
If I use could instead of would, will it be wrong in the above sentence ?

thanks in advance
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Hi sorry, it should read:

For example, last night I was very depressed about my upcoming results, so he said,” Hey, young man, don’t be sad, have faith in yourself.”

I added 'so' in this response.
Regarding could/would, I am sure there is a rule regarding when to use could and would, but to me as a native English speaker, 'could' sounds wrong.
yea 'would' is more appropriate
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In the name of ALLAH my favorite personality is MUHAMMAD S.A.W.W...
he is sincere and honest person. pepol were call apellation ameen and sadiq. muslim bow before one God we should obey of ALLAH
Absolutely he is also my best personality.
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