My First Crush

As the twilight coloured my ambience
i strolled through that unforgettable lane
where i lost my heart
which i never found again

She had sparkling eyes
blended with innocence of a deer
which made my heart sing a song
which she could not hear

As my eyes floated through her oceanic eyes
her face erupted in a luminous smile
a smile for which i could have
travelled a thousand mile

Ended the lane, came night
with extasy, we were in moonlight
day ended, the next evening came
searching for my heart, i went back to the lane

My angelic queen was standing there
wearing starlight in her hair
mysterious looks, digging deep in my heart
as i looked, i forgot all my words

Days passed, weeks passed, months passed
talking to her was touching the stars
thought of burning my passion on a paper
born was this poem, will a relationship be born.
promising.
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hey hitchhiker and maj thanks so much for your compliments, and please pray i get her someday..hehe
will look forward for suggestions on improvement.
take care
ashish
Maybe you could improve the last line. It ends sort of abruptly.
that was hot...keep improving...holla at me...
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