I have been wanting to write a short story for ages. Finally, I have made up my mind. I would really appreciate your help, and comments.

She couldn't put up with the situation any longer. It had been so difficult to imagine what was going on in his mind at that very moment. So she went up to him and asked: Look into my eyes and tell me you don't love me. He was ... (to be continued) Do you like it?
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MAJ! I have been asking to post your pic for ages. perhaps you would say for that too "Finally, I have made up my mind". when that day will come ..tell!
the story begins good ...tell me the end! i like it.
The end??? You know that every good story has a beginning, a body and an end. Deepa, wasn't it you who said something about the beauty of being patient?
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i dont want to be a patient!! Emotion: wink
She couldn't put up with the situation any longer. It had been so difficult to imagine what was going on in his mind at that very moment. So she went up to him and asked: Look into my eyes and tell me you don't love me. He didn't want to tell her what he felt for her, maybe because he was not sure of his own feelings. They looked into each other's eyes and felt what it was dancing a tango but remained motionless waiting for the other to make the next move. It felt like ages, time had never seemed so endless. The magic stopped when the waiter asked her: Would you like anything else to drink? That brought her back to reality in seconds.
tch!! the waiter didnt get any other moment to jump in between! spoiled such a beautiful moment!!Emotion: angry
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the moment was so romantic! any one could go heaD OveR HeelS!!!!! maj ! please next time see that no one should interfere them! so continue...
I would like my story to be as objective as possible, you know the objective point of view. Could some of the male posters write something about the feelings this guy might have been experiencing then I would incorporate them into the story?. I would definitely mention your name as a contributor when the story is finished. My problem is that it is sometimes difficult for me to figure out what guys think.
hmm good point ...ok i will wait!
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