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Please correct the following sentences. Thank you.

My maiden trip to US, the ‘land of perfume’, happened in June, 2006. The purpose was to visit my daughter in LA. But, before emplaning for the country, I became a little nervous. For, raised up in closed and conservative atmospheres, and grown tying up to a restrictive cultural stake, I thought how the Americans belonging, as they were, to a no-holds-barred, permissive society- would interact with a browny Indian like me. My misconception about the deportments of the American people toward to their counterparts from lingered in my mind all through my journey.
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My maiden trip to the US, the 'land of perfume', took place in June, 2006. The purpose was to visit my daughter in LA. But, just before boarding the plane, I became a little nervous. Raised in a closed, conservative environment, tied to a restrictive cultural stake, I was worried about how the Americans belonging as they did to a no-holds-barred, permissive societywould interact with a brown-skinned Indian. My misconception about the behavior of the American people toward Asians nagged at my mind throughout my journey.