could you please check if any changes needed ,,,,before i send the letter

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Dear Mr XXX

I would like to request leave to Join my family for a summer vacation. I would be very grateful if you would permit me to take leave from the 28th of July to the 19th of August.

Thank you.

Sincerely yours,

XXX
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Dear Mr ***

I would like to request leave to join my family for a summer vacation. I would be very grateful if you would permit me to take leave from the 28th of July to the 19th of August.

Thank you.

Yours sincerely ,

(Noonie - we are all just volunteers here, we can't always help people as quickly as you would like).
Teachers: We supply a list of EFL job vacancies
ok thank you dear Emotion: smile im just new here ,,,, i like the site & i think its very helpul for me ....so i just joined ....anyways ill wait 4 a reply from others & hope 2 get 1 soon:)

thanks alot