My life
My love
My ecstasy
My passion
My affection
My heartbeat
My breath
My glances
My touch
My being
My soul
Are all for you.
Won’t you just
Give me your heart
In return?
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Hi, Anita,
your poem is great! An interesting thing I've noticed in it - if you change the order of some lines, or, say, just take a couple of lines separately and end with the last four ones, it will still make sense. For instance, you can place the first two lines after "my soul" and it'll sound in a bit different way - as if you're proceeding from the details to the general things, saying that all above mentioned is a part of your love and life... Really exciting.
Thanks Fair lady. That was really helpful... howz this?

My heartbeat
My breath
My glances
My touch
My affection
My ecstasy
My passion
My being
My soul
My life
My love
Are all for you.
Won’t you just
Give me your heart
In return?
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Thanks fairlady
Nice one anita..and u agree with fair lady words.yes this what will improve ur life.
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chandru
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Thanks Chandran.
great use of vocabulary! excellent job! a very heartfilled poem- Jess
Thanks Jess, for your encouraging words. I appreciate it.
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