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this letter is to my best friend, i need to tell her how i feel. i know this letter needs some work, its just a rough draft, any pointers will be much apreciated
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The sentence in red is redundant since you're expressing your feelings now. I'm instead connecting the words 'friendship' and 'because'. Also you need a heading and an ending, something intimate since it's a love letter. You can change them into some other words if you so wish.
Best of luck,
Dear (your friend name),
I am writing this letter to let you know what I feel for you. I've been holding my feelings back(delete from you) because I was afraid of its outcome...if it would effect our friendship, (I know I may not ever show my feelings, but thats) because i dont want you to feel uncomfortable (delete around me) if you didnt feel the same way as I do. I have been trying to get over my feelings for you since quite some time, but alas! all in vain.After a few days I just keep sitting there,thinking about you and how wonderful you are. I've never ever felt this way about anyone before and i cant even explain what I feel inside.All I can say is its the best feeling in the world, but at the same time its not because we aren't together.
As time goes on my feelings just get stronger and stronger and i cant hold myself back anymore, i need to tell u exactly how i feel. i need you to know that i care for u deeply and i am always here for u no matter what. You are the most beautiful and stunning girl i have ever laid my eyes on. i want you to know you're the person i think about whenever I'm in a bad mood or working long hours, thinking of u puts a smile on my face when nothing else works. You always have my unspoken passion although I might not seem to care. I just want you to know that i think you're the most beautiful girl in the world, i care for you, and I will always be here for you whether we are just friends or more.
Yours and only yours,
its so nice letter
how r u ?
hope ur doing welll
hey i read ur love letter to ur girl friend its so nice..
really she should understand u after u send it to her if she is ur dearest freind..
ok dont be sad be happy..
best ok luck for getting to be with ur girl friend (u both be happy for ever)
ur Love letter was excellent n quite attractive. i hope that it'll let ur Girl friend know ur position.
keep it up n be Happy man
Anonymous:screw all what ever anybody said , point of letter is your telling somebody how you feel , whats in your heart , and i am guessing if its how i felt it isnt all correct neat , and shit . mate say it from the heart and thats all you can do , be who you are , forget grammar literacy , just say whats going on in your heart , and if you do that , youve got a chance , as you want the person to love you not shakespear , and im a writer and im saying write whats in your heart buddy , good luck , hope you find the one
Anonymous:make it a little bit deep and write about the day you felt for her. the other one is that, tell her that why you became her best frined.
Anonymous:this letter brought me tears!!!
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