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Hi,

Question:
Which sentences are correct?

Sentence1:
I obtained a BSc in Business, and my other achievements are outlined on my resume.
Sentence2:
I obtained a BSc in Business, and more of my achievements are outlined on my resume.
Sentence3:
I obtained a BSc in Business, and other of my achievements are outlined on my resume.

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Hi,

#! and #2 are OK, but I'd say #1 is more common.

#3 is not correct.

Clive
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hi,

How about sentence 4 and 5 ?

Sentence4:
I obtained a BSc in Business, and other about my achievements are outlined on my resume.
Sentence5:
I obtained a BSc in Business, and more about my achievements are outlined on my resume.

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Hi,

How about sentence 4 and 5 ?

Sentence4:
I obtained a BSc in Business, and other about my achievements are outlined on my resume. Not grammatical.
Sentence5:

I obtained a BSc in Business, and more about my achievements is are outlined on my resume. Awkward sentence. Don't use it.

Clive
Sentences number 1 and 2 are the most correct sentences. Not sure about 3. 4,5 are definitely incorrect gramatically and also doesn't sound well.
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